shunyun

Thanks Robert. Yeah, I'm a bit intimidated by those lower tones; I'm work on that and record some more.

On the rythmic cues, do you mean I'm sounding like I'm not sure where to come in or cut off?

I've uploaded a song finally... My first try was aweful, I really didn't put a good foot forward, my apologies to all.

At any rate, I've recorded a song written ad sung by Tom Waits on his Mule Variations album, titled Take It With Me. This was a one-take deal (after a fitful start, granted). I'm playing guitar while singing. I recorded into Logic Express 8, then added a little reverb on my voice (hopefully not too much).

As I listen to myself, I sound like I've got a mouth full of marbles. Also seems like the emotion ebbs and flows; that's likely because I'm playing guitar, hard to chew gum and walk at the same time... At any rate, I hope this is enough quality and a decent song to show my typical performance. It's always hard for me to record in a room with no audience.

I've put the song on my TMV page: http://www.themodernvocalist.com/profile/SeanAOnion

Thanks for any feedback and direction,

shunyun