tsitalon1

My first response would be, how do you feel about your vocals? Do you listen back to your recordings? The song you posted has your vocals drowned out a bit, but it seems you were off pitch quite a bit.

I would work with scales on a keyboard and record the sessions until your sure you have the notes/pitch down..

Let me know what you think. I'm trying to better my vocals.

Re-write of an existing John Legend song...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TWeNaoI4wdE

Hey guys,

I've been singing for about a year and trying to get better. My main inpiration is Craig David (r&b style). I have noticed that I can make several different tones. I have attached a couple covers that I perfomred in my home studio...again, please provide hones positive feedback.

BootyMan: http://sites.google.com/site/tsitalon1/Home/file-access/BootyMan1.1.mp3?attredirects=0

Whatsyourflavor: http://sites.google.com/site/tsitalon1/Home/file-access/WhatsYourFlava3.mp3?attredirects=0

Thanks,

James