Burnit

SOme parts sound pretty good but then you go out of your range and then it sounds bad. Other than than I like it, I really do. Nice drums too but just do push so hard. You should stay with it you could be good. I hope your feelings are not hurt because I like your voice but you have to be perfect through the entire song. How old are you? OMFG killer guitar player dude! I wish I had that guy. Who is he??

How about letting us hear sonthing else?

Sounds like you are trying too hard. Sounds good but you need to not sound like you are trying so hard. Just relax and it might sound better. Thats what I get from it.