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Thanks for comment. :)

Does anyone have an input for me please?

regards

M

Hey here's something I recorded that turned out a bit cheesy but still good result ya.

https://soundcloud.com/1234melovi/bembee

Please give some feedback :)

Please send me some positive critique

A new song ive recorded, a fun little tune.

http://soundcloud.com/1234melovi/overglow

/ Melovi

Anyone more interested in singing and all this who can give an imply of what i should sing in the future?

Thank you for your advice!

I had to record something on instant, so I just babbled with some words about love, like a lovesong goes, and began singing randomly...

Hey,

this is improvisations of song

https://soundcloud.com/johanneq-1/real-babe

What do you think about it?

Yes, i agree completely. I'll better myself.

Thank you for your answers!!

Jens, What is a waver? To me waver is a bigger kind of "tone" that the vibrato vibrates with. it is more heavy, has more "mass". Please define more what you mean so i can be sure what you are talking about.

In almost every of the versales you've pointed out, to me that is a tone with an "E" in it. (waver)

And yes you're probably right about it, that i should tone everything down. I wouldn't record something like this if it was something more real, i mean if i could make money somehow or wanted anyone to listen to it like a hitsong, then i wouldn't go like this.

Keith, I have a pretty good mic, but something is wrong with the program when i export the file into an mp3. I don't know what to do! I've searched on google, but find no solution. I use Mixcraft 4.

mr-leonor99, yes i know. I just wanted to record something that was straight through live, and this is what came out. it's very simple the song :)

oh, oh...

you are someone I love

you are someone I must find

because I cannot win without your love

I cannot see, your eyes,

unclear to me every night

I go to bed

you are

you are my star

so be at peace

stay with the one's you love

oh, oh...

https://soundcloud.com/johanneq-1/basic-love

This is all through live. No cut or anything.

thank you Jens.

I will try to do another song later. I sing quite fast, that's what I know. :)

Hi ronws,

thank you for your correction and advice! I thank you for that. I need to work more on my voice, it is not as stable as I want it to be.

I think I need someone to help me with my voice, like a teacher. I've done it a couple of times, but not more than that, unfortunately. But it will come.

The singing is working for me in my ears, somehow. Because I find it to be beautiful, how the melody flows up and down. But it's not in my town it's happening. The thing is, I hear too that it's off-pitch every now and then, but it's OK for me to listen to.

It's not perfect at all, it needs work.

PS. I updated the video, now it works again. High Quality, 720p.

Hi,

I put this song together in a program with my father, he plays the electric guitar. I'm think the outcome is what I aimed for, it is simpe and direct, but slightly off-key, unfortunately.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-QmwGp2OLxg

Inputs is welcomed!

I changed the video into something gay men turns on by, and women...

The audio is the same.

Here is the lyric

"i met you in the wild night

where all is slumber and all is fright

i saw you through my glas

i took you under a deranged setting

but never set my love on fire

you don't know what love is"

yes... also, people around me that has listened to this song had a hard time hearing the words, so i need to better myself on that.

i hadn't time to re-record this, and the project ain't saved since i reinstalled windows to windows 8 try-out version. so i can't change anything.

Thank you

More inputs, anyone?

i'm wearing a linen

thank you for your replies

the song is based on one-chord, it's quite a simple song... i too think there should be more dynamics. I will work on that on the next song, this song is finished. :)

Hi.

I'm new to this board, never found an active board about singing - so i hope i will enjoy my stay.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nl6a-iZM9xE

This is the latest song i've recorded. Please tell me what you think about it!!!

Greets