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@ronws and @Tommy thank you very much. I try to learn and improve it.

@ronws i sent you an e-mail. :)

i think, their mix are different so i didn't understand the improvement of your mic. first one has more treble and reverb. also you sang more emotional. the second one is more serious and little bassy i think. they are great. 2nd one is 1 step ahead.

it is my new cover. it was recorded with my new sound-card which is twin impact, but i still dont like my mic.

Yes there were some mixing problem. i didn't use compressor/limiter and there were some bad eq issues. i will upload my new attemp soon.

Thank you for your advice. Regarding what you said, what is the best exercise to make sure I'm allowing my larynx to be more free?

Thank you.

Yes. you need it, but i don't mean force it or scream like a hell. I said, you should try to sound like "full of body" It takes time. You need more support, more "open your mouth with true larynx position"

Ok, calm down, It is not a simple song. i still work on it and it is the first attemp to sing this song for me. I agree one important think, you said "very pronounced focus upward".

But totally, I think you exaggerate a little. I take into consideration all of it. Thanks for comment.

You definetly should resonate your sinus not nose(i totally agree). try to improve your diaphram. sing with more power. try to listen orginal song again and again. and try to give same feeling. i listened your Oasis cover. it is what i heard: you don't permit your larynx to sounds go freely. you don't control your air, you hold, you whisper so that notes are blocked in your mouth. you should learn to resonate notes with full-body

Also, you can try to sing little harder song to learn push the notes more clear with power from larynx .(be sure to don't force) when you try more harder songs, you proabably sing soft(as this songs) and so notes won't go freely and you understand what i mean. (don't afraid from your volume)

It is a guitar work than a vocal work so that noone may interest with it. if you sing this song in orginal tune(you sang it in very comfortable zone), people probably talk about your diaphram technique, tone, your higher notes etc.

anyway it sound good to me as a "cover". you sound like "kings of convience".

Thanks Olem. (i forgot it). I keep it on my mind of your opinions. It is very hard song to sing. Line is up to C#5, has glissendo (b4 to E5) passage and certainly high F#5 scream. Coverdale is amazing vocal for all time. I still work on this song.

That was my old-area recording. i think it is not bad. I took a few recording 1 month ago with better mix and better technique. But I didn't want to upload it. I'll upload after take some reviews from this recording.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4ZTC70QAU1g

Thanks for advice. Yes i noticed that i was cutting after i released it.

I recorded it then i uploaded immidiately without listened it carefully. but when i listened the orginal version, i think that i can hold the notes long. (i actually hold some of them but not all of them.)

I'm also looking for vibrato exercises, can anyone offer best of one from youtube?

I agree to Jugalator but are there little timing problem? It may happen bacause of DAC which cause latency. I'm not sure.

Try my new cover

This is my new-era cover which are better technique, vocal tonal quallity and better mixing. the others which are "back on the streets", "bark at the moon", "sweet child of mine" (bark at the moon will be upload soon.)

The old attemps are which "the trooper", "love song", "seperate ways", "i want to break free". (Those will re-recorded in the near future, bu you can listen anyway. these are still online)

First one is Still Of The Night from Whitesnake:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hs8fj7NxprM

Thanks for comment. It is first attempt for Bark at the Moon. i will probably record again in the near future.

Hello to everyone! I'm new in the forum but i'm traking the site on youtube for very long time. I decided to record some stuff to share and take a critiques!

My first recording is Ozzy- Bark At The Moon

You can add your thinking to youtube and if you vote it, it will be glad!

Video is at the here:

It will be under construction. It will come back soon.