spiral_out

No prob. Good luck!

I think you have a really nice sounding voice in there. I can see it really blossoming if you keep at it.

I can't pinpoint anything to help you but I can hear a great voice in there so I thought I'd let you know.

And yes your breathing was extremely audible! But you already know that..

Great vibrato! Pitch sounds solid to me too. I'm pretty sure any singing teacher would tell you that you're not using enough nasal resonance. To my ears, it sounds like you're singing with your nose pinched/blocked/closed.