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Pitchy in spots because you are wearing yourself out. Which is a pity because you have the natural range for this song, except for the low parts. You might to just keep the middle line, on that ("where do we go?"). What is wearing you out is you are trying to say the words as you speak them. Instead, you want to sing them. Childhood should be come ch ah d eh d. It seems wrong but while singing, people already know the context and they will hear "childhood." This will help you keep some resonance better, which will give you the volume you need and you can quit pushing air to get volume.

 

Basically, I totally believe you can do this song well, you just needed some vowel tuning and that will be easier once you realize that you sing this, not speak this.

 

You should get an avatar. I know you had one in the old format.

I appreciate your reply so much, my friend. Ok, so my main problem is being pitchy right? That means I will have to correct some of my pitches right? Sorry... I'm still not really good at singing... How should I correct my pitch? And by the way, I'm an asian and I'm wearing braces. I don't know if being an asian and wearing braces do affect my pronunciation? And when I sing "where do we go?" I should sing the line in my middle note is it?

By the way, did I nail the end part half? What is my highest range in that song sung by me?

Yeah... so my friend just asked me to try this song and I did. I'm not trying to be cocky for singing this song or what, I just want to know what do I need to correct. Btw, am I on pitch or flat all the time?

http://vocaroo.com/i/s1TiXzlRhzPX

Hey thanks for the replies guys, I appreciate it. Btw, is there any part of the recording that I'm singing on pitch? Just wanna take it as example of "on pitch". And also, is this woman singing on pitch? 

http://vocaroo.com/i/s102dPbwacC1

http://vocaroo.com/i/s1iHNNKLudSh

The link above are me singing Sweet Child O mine by GNR while I was driving lool. So am I on pitch in the recording?

After 6 months of learning online, I find nowhere to go to improve myself.

Below are the songs that I have recorded, please bare with the quality though

Aerosmith Dream On

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0nbYX91apa8

Aerosmith Cryin

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0eReG9k4aHl

Based on the songs above that I sang, do I have potential?

http://vocaroo.com/i/s1Pu0x09srMW

Above is the link that I was singing Cryin by Aerosmith...

The recording is not professional. I need critique

TY!

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0l9sJHdzv4B

link above is me singing Dream On by Aerosmith. I've posted this before and I sang too terribly. Hope to get some critiques again! Thanks.

Did I sing on pitch this time? And at the final phrase the insanely note after "dream on" is "ahhhhhahahah" sometimes I can sustain it till the end but sometimes I can't. Why is that?

Thanks to the both of you! Really much appreciated! If I'm not a baritone is it safe to classify myself as a tenor?

I'll surely work on what have you guys told me. Peace!

Any reply? Thanks!

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0HlUrwcqQQv

I was singing in my car and recorded it haha. Please don't mind the sound quality.

Link above is me singing Dream On. Tell me what should I improve on and am I actually a baritone?

I really appreciate help and support from you guys. I'll be taking singing lesson and I'll work on it. I guess I was just being distracted by people who always tell me not to keep dreaming and just concentrate on what I'm good at. And yeah I'll firstly improve my singing first and won't be thinking of fame. I have back up plans as well! Thanks guys.

Yes I'll be taking singing lessons! And why not dream bigger?

I want to live my dream up to be a famous singer but it seems like I'm just not made of singing? Can I really work for it?

Voted. GL

http://soundcloud.com/seng-zai-4/linkin-park-numb

recorded in my room which is a little difficult for me to sing. anyway, I need critique and am I a baritone or tenor?

http://soundcloud.com/seng-zai-4/testing-high-notes

How do I sound like? Please don't care the rolling in the~ "deeeep" I was burping.

Any advice is welcome.

Thanks!

Thanks!