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andyravelo

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  1. That's the thing haha..I'm not sure how to lower my volume on the D5. It sounds as if I'm straining or pulling my chest up. Just got to get my mix to sound chesty up there but less strained. Thanks again guys

    Your D5 is great you just need to maintain the exact same level of compression and back off the volume a little so that you arent killing yourself on that sound.

    "Bullet straight through my brain"

    You are too pure on the vowels and hard on the consonants this prob is through the entire song not just that part.

    It should be more like "tEHgAHH bOHlEHHd strEHD thrEHH mAHH brEHHn" and you want to shift the jaw the least amount throughout. You are not opening your jaw enough so the resonance is getting crammed into the nasal cavity if you open up more to the vowels I'm talking about you will get more of a balance of the chest and nasal/mask resonances.

    Your mix is already excellent this is not the problem!! brett mannings program I dont' think will help you with the things I'm talking about as it doesn't address vowel mods or jaw shifting.

  2. Thanks for your feedback! I just started Brett Manning's Mastering mixed voice program, so I hope to improve on vowel modifications that you have mentioned. How can I improve the phrases for "bullet straight through my brain" and the D5 on "still catch a grenade for you"? Will those notes come easily as I grow as I am only 19?

    Hi Andy,

    You have a nice bright timbre and a nice balance of weightines in the voice. There are some things that I recommend you work on:

    Notice how choppy you are with the phrases? This is why you are closing down on the sound. You are very hard on the consonants.

    this closing down is what is making you sound nasal also because the sound has nowhere to go so it all crams into the nasal passage.

    30 secs in "from the first KISS" see how you pinch and get closed down on kiss? you do this all throughout the song. What you want to do is avoid the harsh "ih" vowel and go more to the EH so it'll be more "from the fehst kehs" and glue them together, remove the space between each note so that the vocal tract can stay relaxed and open.

    "but you never give" the reason you went flat on the give is because when you went down you let hte PLACEMENT ALSO GO DOWN, try to keep the sensation in the SAME SPOT (on the roof of the mouth rather than letting it drift down)

    "had your eyes waaahd 'OPIN" again take it to OHPEHN on the EH". This stuff is ALL THROUGHOUT the song. You will have to really work these phrases separately focusing on vowel modifications in order to create space so that the sound doesn't tighten down on you. I recommend getting with a coach that KNOWS HOW TO CARRY OVER SCALES TO SINGING because it's not enough just to practice scales, you need to learn how to carry it over into the song.

    try singing the song on a single vowel like AH, OH, EE, etc and making sure to modify the vowels as you ascend so that you can release the tension and create space to keep everything open and not clamped down.

    You are doing well and have a nice mixed voice. You are not far off from where you want to be.

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