boninsongs

Hey guys I feel I am slowly improving since joining the forum! I wrote a new song for you to critique. What do you like about it and what needs work (probably most of it...)?

Thanks!

Thanks guys for the criticism I will get some more material up as soon as I can. I feel my vocal delivery lacks interest and I'm not sure exactly what I need to do/practice to make it more emotional.

Hey guys! I am a guitarist from Calgary and I have decided to take the plunge into singing and lyricism. For years I never really sang out of fear and now I have a lot of catching up to do to make my voice sound good enough to play my songs and have people actually want to hear them. I am unsure where to start and what to practice. I have included a link of my singing for your criticism.