dannyyoung

 It's great to have a feedback!, i'm still trying to explore my voice in order to find what sounds good and what is bad.

Did you hear a bad accent on the attempts? I did miss some words that should have sung better.

 I was trying to sing naturally and spontaneously based on the original versions of the tunes,I didn't have a plan and maybe that's a problam too or just what my voice is a capable of.

As I mentioned I have never recorded myself or even sang karaoke before,I will sure check on the videos and try to learn from them.

On the first chorus It felt like I was trying to get higher without 'falsetto' which caused to some breath struggle.

Was it really bad to your ears?

I really  appreciate any kind of feedback.

Thanks,

Blue suede shoes: http://vocaroo.com/i/s0yBkpRaJcrx

Life on mars: http://vocaroo.com/i/s0ePtWdTNtKu

Life on mars track is on the original 'studio' key which felt tough to reach,

Hoping to get your feedback on both.

Thanks,

On 1/24/2017 at 2:16 AM, Robert Lunte said:

Hey Dan, great to have you here. 

 

Review:

Life On Mars:

- Your guitar is out of tune it seems. You need to fix that for sure.

- Your inability to accompany yourself on guitar is preventing you from being able to sing this better then you could. I would suggest that the first thing you is find a karaoke track to sing over. If you can't play the guitar part for the song, you won't be able to sing it any better. Get the karaoke track and try again. Feel free to post it here... its distracting YOU.

 

Blue Suede Shoes:

- Same issue as "Mars...".

- I suggest you get the bed tracks to these songs and practice learning them with singing only for a while.

Yes the guitar was out of tune,it's probably the best tip to start with 

I Guess it's going to take a lot of practice in order to be comfortable in both singing and playing,there is no doubt that it feels much better when i sing without the guitar.

Is it the case when my voice sound really bad and I don't even notice that?

Anyway,I tried to make a better arrangement  and would love to hear your feedback.

Thanks,

Hi,

I'm just another guitarist who decided to give it a shot with singing  on my own.

I know that this is very raw and need work(recorded on my old phone),I'd still  like to get your very honest opinion+feedback on my

color voice and performance for the 2 covers.

Life on mars: 

Blue suede shoes:

Thanks,