sandwich

On 8/20/2018 at 5:50 PM, Robert Lunte said:

Reviews are not free. It is $20. 

 

Alright I’ll bite. I paid for one. Hit me!

I thought this was very cool. You got a style going on and clearly care about sounding good. You have an ear for what sounds good. That’s my take. I don’t know why this would hurt your throat, though. Maybe you’re just not used to singing a lot yet. I remember my throat hurting when I was in my early days. Just wasn’t used to singing all the time. It’s not like that anymore. You’re probably fine. Stamina is a thing that comes with practice.

Improvement would just come with doing what you are doing now but gradually take it higher and try getting louder.  The only other thing would be to just attempt harder songs. Stretch yourself. Be brave. Braveness is 80% of the game. Copy artist’s pronunciation. It will teach you a lot, technically. That’s it really.

On 8/25/2018 at 8:25 AM, LWSinger said:

As if there is a fee for feedback on songs? this is exploitation at best. I mean come on? The music industry is laughable at times. $20 for a stranger to comment over the internet..world has gone mad.. From one peer to another, Sandwich I thought your voice is so very unique, I actually haven't heard this song by Jeff Buckley. You have a very wide range, and you nailed the high notes, some of them were slightly flat (only a few, seriously) but you carried the song well and did it justice, considering I haven't heard it I can only judge on what I have heard now. it was quite difficult to hear at times due to the recording and it would be awesome to hear a studio recording of your vocals. Your voice reminds me of Matthew Bellamy (Muse Lead singer), have you ever covered any of their songs? would be awesome to hear you cover one of their songs, I think you would smash it. With further vocal training you would kick arse. Keep it up dude  

Thanks, man. DUDE, if Hallelujah is the extent of your Jeff Buckley experience (which was mine for ages), you are in for a shock and a treat. 

Listen to the whole of his album 'Grace' and prepare to have a new favourite singer. 

I usually get told Matt Bellamy or Tom Yorke.

Those flat high notes can serve as a lesson for all of us... you have to get used to singing that high, in a live setting, through a Mic and listen back. accurately hearing your own pitching in that setting is actually quite different to just singing in your bedroom. I didn't notice I was flat until I listened back... which doesn't happen a whole lot in my bedroom. 

Practice with a Mic. All I'm saying.

Haha!! Amateur feedback is fine XD All I expected, honestly. 

Ah. I thought this was a forum.  My bad. 

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