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Hello everybody!
This is my second attempt to recording a song, still some pitch problems here and there and troubles with the english pronunciation
https://soundcloud.com/dbass1/betterman-cover
Comments and critiques are well accepted!
Thanks!
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Bernie I listened carefully to the song and I realize these things you said! I totally agree and I thank you for advicing me this. My mothertounge is not english, therefore I tend to pronunciate in an unnatural way... I'll try to work on that!
I think I got "tired" vocally at the end of the song.. I always record the songs from the beginning to the end, because I think the feel is delivered in the whole take, if it's right.. it's also a good point to improve my "stamina"! while when practising I try to repeate single phrases to improve the technique.
However good points, I'll work on that!
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Wabba_treads, thank you very much, I feel I still have some problems controlling the vibrato, and the voice in some points is "trembling" and pitchy, I agree!
Ronws, thank you very much! I also read the memoirs of Scott Weiland, and this song's meaning is so much intense. I try not to mimic some other singer, because I'm really trying to focus on my own voice and try to emotionally express as much as I can what I "read between the lines" besides technique, this is my main "struggle"
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Hello everyone!
It's been I while I haven't posted anything, so I wanted to post this cover I recorded recently..
I'm really open to any kind of critique or comment , I feel it still lacks precision in many parts, and my pronunciation is far from perfect
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Thank you very much Tommy for you constructive critique. I feel I have lots of problems with sound emission, technique is poor and that's what I will be focusing on. Now I'm seriously approaching to singing as a proper "instrument", just as I did with bass guitar, but it takes years of practice, I know.
English is not my first language, that's true I'm italian, however I will try to pay more attention to these pronunciation nuances, but I don't think it is a big problem..I am more concerned about my singing technique, and I would appreciate to know from you in which moments of the song you sensed specific technical mistakes (emission, "throat-singing", out of pitch, etc..), because of the lack of experience it's still hard for me to detect all the mistakes I do, but surely you can.
Thanks ronws I will try to soften up on the consonants, I don't think it is a mixing problem, it's still my imprecise english pronunciation. I really appreciate what you said about the feel for the song, to me is as equally fundamental as technique.
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Amazing tone..wow! Great performance, and you put your personal vocal style in the song without copying AC/DC's singing
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Hello!
I'm new to this forum, and I'm also new to singing. I've been playing bass for a long time, now I would like to learn to sing, but I realize how hard it is. I started to take some lessons, and I'm trying to work hard.
I posted this song... a cover from The Beatles, Don't Let me Down..
I would appreciate to receive comments, critiques to my singing, because I know how hard it will be to become a good singer and I am open to listen to critiques and humbly work hard on my singing.
So please comment!
Thanks everybody
http://soundcloud.com/dbass1/dont-let-me-down-the-beatles
Better Man - Pearl Jam
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Thank you very much, it is a song that really speaks to me.. to me singing from the heart is the most important thing.. also technique is really important, and I'm trying to work hard on it