You have a good voice but your tone is very breathy and it was hard to hear you...try to sing with more resonance, like with a thyroid tilt, which I actually just posted about, sing like you are crying(it helps the sound resonate in the proper place), lift your soft palate(inhale the breath), and make your lips kind of like duck lips, as weird as it sounds ,hope it helps=) it will bring your voice a little higher and more of a ringing quality=)