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W772

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  1. Hey there, I just listened to your clip! :)

     

    To me, your tone sounds pretty nice. However, the thing that could be improved the most is your breathing. For some of the notes, it sounded flat pitchwise and I think the reason (based on my own experiences) is because your not supporting your notes. What I mean is, when you sing some of the notes, it sounds like you're singing from shallow breaths. Instead, your breaths should come deep from your diaphragm. To support the note, there should be a bit of a 'firm but flexible' push from your abdominal muscles. If you do this, your notes should sound more on pitch based on my own experiences.

     

    But yeah, have a google on "breathing from the diaphragm for singing". However, let's see what other people say - again, this is all my own opinion. I hope you can improve :)

  2. Hey, thanks for the feedback - really appreciate it.

     

    To be honest, I'm not sure what voice type I am but it's interesting to hear you say that I'm a "lyric tenor" - I'll definitely look into that more. And yeah, I agree with bringing more depth/warmth into my tone - it might be just slightly lacking that at the beginning of the song.

     

    Anyway, just out of curiosity, do you know any singers out there who I sound similar to? I suppose I've always been curious to know who I sound like and what kind of genre would best suit the voice I have. Btw, this is also open to any forum member who wants to give their thoughts/opinions :)

  3. Hey there! You make a really good point. Mariah doesn't sing that part, it's Miguel. I think they blurted out the profanity - there's an edited and an explicit version on Youtube.

    Btw, thanks for alerting me on the profanity stuff. I'm not the type to use profanity openly, I just loved the song so much that I didn't want to add any editing that would mess up the song lol.

    But anyway, I appreciate the feedback. I've never really asked others for feedback so it's quite new for me to be posting on Youtube etc :)

  4. I'm not familiar with the song, but I think your voice is very good. The only thing I noticed was that you seemed "breathy", and you took breaths maybe when you shouldn't have.

    But your tone and pitch seemed very good (again, I'm not familiar with the tune so I can't really speak to wether you were in tune with the original)

    Thanks for taking the time to critique me! :)

    I appreciate your feedback! Yeah, I do tend to run out of breath sometimes. Personally, I feel there were some 'ever so slightly' pitchy parts but that's alright - no one is perfect lol. I also feel a lot more comfortable singing in my mid-register so the next step for me would be to sing in a higher register (mixed voice/belting).

    For any people out there, feel free to add your comments (or what you'd like to hear more of etc) :)

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