Heya Kevin, Thanks for that! Glad to hear at least technically I'm doing alright, still a bit of a worry there! The song cuts off because it's the beginning of a looooonnnnggg instrumental post-rock/post-metal type of song. Here it is instrumentally when we played it live last year, if you're interested: So I didn't want to bore anyone with the whole thing (I'm the guy with the black left handed Les Paul btw) Vocally I wanted to do something pretty low-key, this is pretty much the first time I've ever put vocals in a song, save a few experiments previously. But as you can hear from the song, it's a builder.... and I think doing anything too up front and impressive would most likely detract from the atmosphere in the song. It's also only the 3rd time I've ever recorded it, so it'll get better with time. Small baby steps for me - confidence issues and all that... it took me a bit of courage to even sign up and post this here! But I do value feedback, because I want to get better and try to get some more songs under my belt. The sort of bands I really like and that inspire me: A Perfect Circle, Tool, Karnivool, Lesser Key, Circa Survive, Radiohead, and Deftones. So I'm heading roughly in that direction! I've been watching your videos on Youtube for a good while as well Kevin, really helpful stuff, so just wanted to say thanks very much for those!