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  1. Joe,your site and course have been known to coaches for a while. Long before your post. Remember, its OUR business so we are constantly seeking out any and all new competition. I just helped Robert squash a coach in Singapore for saying they could teach his TVS methodology when they had no permission to do so. If coaches are out there online, I find them. I'm quite good at it being that I was in IT for close to 10 years before teaching voice.

    Kevin, the site just went up. I've never sold a course. That's how I know you didn't buy one! It's brand new. Look at the social media pages. They're empty. The first youtube videos went up two weeks ago. I'm not sure what you're talking about.

    My course is so new and unpromoted, that only a few people have signed up for even the free course, and I know who they are. You may have signed up, but you didn't watch the videos, because I've just checked the viewing history of the videos, and I'm certain that you didn't see any of them. Maybe you watched the introduction video, but I can tell for certain from the data that you didn't watch a single course video.

  2. Ron... oh ya... add to that, a Mastered degree in music from the University of Miami & over 12 years of private study with 5 different, coaches.... I forgot some stuff on my resume. Anyways...

    @Joe Naab

    Please don't lump me into Kevin's sentiments. I believe he makes very honest, tough love insights and I won't argue with him either... but if you read my posts, I never directed them at you. You can infer and imply that I was, but the fact remains, I never did. My comments were in general terms, in regards to the industry, not you personally with the exception of my feedback on your recording, which is solid. 

    Yes, you make a good point. Nobody knows you well enough to be too presumptuous about what they think they know about you. Sure, you can hang your hat on that. Fine. I will also point out, you seem to be patient and cool headed.

    Don't forget, I deleted comments from Kevin's initial post for reasons that I felt were the right thing to do, so let that stand as my disposition toward you personally. But do NOT infer that my comments about the industry in general are directed toward you, because they were not. 

    In the meantime, let's hear that Silent Lucidity again, with better rhythm and pitch.

    Sorry, Robert. I did think, in the context of all the posts, that you were directing your comments at me. My bad. Your feedback was spot on and great.

    I'm thinking I may record a different song to post here to "clear the palette", so to speak, and to give you guys a taste of something else.

  3. Joe - "Methinks thou protest too much". Your VERY long answer is a perfect indication you're not as sure footed as you'd want us to all believe. Your long list of supposed accomplishments

    You see Joe, I DO know what you teach as I bought your course under another name. I have every vocal course on the market. Why? No the competition. I have a pretty good idea what you know in terms of depth of knowledge on the subject. How you sing is also a glaring indication of your overall abilities. The choices you made artistically show me a lot.

    Understand that this is our livelihood and we are constantly having to answer for people like yourself who feel they can just put out product because they can. If you're going to step in our ballpark, be prepared to play against heavy hitters.

    Robert and I were both teachers for many years before deciding to create courses for the public. We spent a long time learning the craft of teaching, creating a methodology and gaining experience with people. I don't see that from you.

    So you took a couple of courses and have read some books. And...? How many students have you taught consistently for at least 2-3 years? What is your methodology? Your pedagogy on voice?

    You see, Robert and I are trying to raise the bar on training singers but someone with your inexperience trying to step into our profession raises huge red flags. You don't understand the business, and it is a business. You're not comprehending what you're doing to the profession overall.

    Robert and myself commenting the way we are is not personal. It's business. Our business. Any new kind on the block is going to scrutinized and forced to prove they have the muster. Frankly, I don't see it. Yet.

    You should stay below the radar, teaching students regularly for a few years, gaining experience, gaining insight - before going anywhere near trying to teach the public. Having taken a few courses and having read some books simply isn't enough. Myself and Robert were students of voice for at least 20 years before putting out product. You're jumping in water way over your head at this point

    Take a step back and reassess.

    Kevin, I do very much appreciate your feedback, and, yes, I'm already taking a step back to reassess. I reassess all the time.

    However, I do ask you to be honest. I know for certain that you didn't sign up for my free course before you made your first post, under any name. There were no signups between posting the song and your post. I'm not even promoting the site anywhere as it's still in early development. I also know that you didn't take the paid course. Also, my site is still in beta and I've only posted about 10% of the content I plan to shoot over the coming year.

    And, remember, I was under the radar here until you posted publicly that I had a course. No one here would know of my project if you hadn't brought it up in this thread.

    Kevin, I had to come back to edit this. You actually said you bought my course. Why would say that when you didn't?

  4. I wanted to add one more post here to respond to these other great comments, especially from Youcansinganything and MDEW, and so that I don't bury your inboxes.

    I'm an amateur singer who works very hard at it now and dreams of having an amazing voice within a couple years. I still make lots of mistakes across the board. That's why I came here and paid to share and receive feedback. If I were already awesome, I wouldn't be here!

    25 years ago I studied SLS in L.A. weekly for 18 months and barely improved. I worked insanely hard at it. I grew discouraged and stopped studying, though always sang at home for the next 25 years while building a different profession. A few years ago I recommitted to vocal studies and began to find all kinds of great things that worked on my voice the way I needed it to. So I stopped everything in life and immersed myself into it. It's been miraculous. I'm literally better each day than the day before. And instead of my rate of improvement slowing over time, it's now accelerating because of how I've customized my own training practice.

    My mission in life now is to create an amazing training program as if I could send it back in time to my younger self so he could fulfill his dream much sooner in life. Since I can't do that, I'm targeting young people, beginners, 13-25 years old, who want to sing strong-voiced pop/rock/theater, with an emphasis on developing their own, unique signature sound and expression. I'm more than happy to, as Youcansinganything wrote above, refer them to great private instruction when the situation calls for it. I'm already planning to refer any Seattle students to Robert, for example.

    And though I'm still horribly insecure about my singing voice, I'm not the slightest bit concerned about my ability to teach vocal training. I'm good at it and getting better quickly.

    And in reading Robert's list of criteria to be considered an "expert coach", I realized that this is impossible to achieve, without first being a non-expert coach, right? It's logical. I'm a non-expert coach. I can almost already check off items 2, 3, 4, 5 and 7 (jury is out on 7!). And to get to #1 and #6, you have to start somewhere, right? And I don't think you need thousands of students, maybe hundreds would suffice, and I'm not sure if I'll ever do private lessons or performance coaching. I'd love to hold workshops one day, but I learned from my executive coaching experience that I don't like to have a lot of appointments blocked out in my weekly schedule. An "all day Saturday" thing twice a month would suit me best. We'll see.

    And, finally, I'm here to make new friends with people who love to sing and to teach others how to train their voices. All of you have been great. Thanks again.

  5.     Joe, The vocals sound great. I just want to make a quick comment on the "singing vs Training/Coaching " thing.

        There are a lot of choices in the singing aspect that have nothing to do with Training/Coaching. Prosody, Rhythm, vocal punctuation, inflection, choice of vocal weight, diction, To scream/distort, woofy growl or fry, Soft voice, full voice, staccato, legato ..........   All of these are artistic choices. A guide for making these decisions are not usually a part of training. Maybe they should be if one is going to call themselves a "Singing" coach. But it is not necessary for a "Vocal" coach.

        These choices are up to the singer. A singer can make bad choices on these things and still have perfect control of their instrument and the ability to train and Teach others to make Healthy, Solid, Beautiful Sounds.

        Training to have the ability to sound like Janis Joplin or Celine Dion does not mean that everyone is going to accept the choice that you made between the two on a given song.

    Thank you so much. I wanted to add that I didn't know how serious some take the submissions here. I'm here as a student wanting to get better.  Obviously, I'm limited to using published karoake tracks, so my style may have to clash with what I have at my disposal. It was really posted for the purpose of what you wrote, for some feedback on choices, tone/timbre, and for any glaring abnomolies that I might be blind to.

    I truly can sing this song so many different ways, including more like the original. But I'm not an impersonator nor do I desire to sing in a tribute band. I deliberately train to alter the original performance as a way to refine my own voice and style and to decorate the bed track with the melodies, rhythm and mood that I'm "channeling", so to speak. This is what I love to do. I underestimated how upset it would make some people here.

  6. Yes, which has become a huge problem in our industry in the last 2-3 years. So many "me-too" voice coaches that honestly, simply don't know hardly anything about how the singing voice works, let alone how to train it and demonstrate it. We have entered into a new era of over saturation of under and unqualified internet teachers looking to make a buck. And the people that are hurt the most are the students, first and foremost, and good quality professionals that are losing the incentive to even continue with all this "noise" going on.

    Robert, some of your comments here leave me stratching my head more than Kevin's. You and I had a fun, animated, intelligent conversation about vocal training for 90 minutes by phone last month when I was disclosing my new professional project to you before buying your course, so you could have the opportunity to ask me not to buy it! I did this because of how much I respect you guys who have been on the front line for decades.

    You're awesome. I'm loving your course. Give me a chance. You might discover that I'm awesome, too, just a little more green, but not the slightest bit unqualified to do what I do. I know my limits and I want to enter this field respectfully. And I'm from Seattle, and I'll be home in June, and we're going to be friends whether you like it or not! :-)

  7. I am disappointed that Robert deleted that portion of my comment that dealt with you having a vocal course because it's an important point that I made.

    Your intentions to offer a lower priced alternative to more expensive courses may be noble, but in the end you hurt the business overall by offering a sort of "Made in China" knockoff. It lessens the market value for more qualified teachers and more comprehensive courses. It also makes people less likely to buy courses from myself, Robert, Ken, Brett etc. because they see a lower price. They get the course, realize it's not out together by a professional teacher and they become disillusioned about buying vocal courses from anyone else. Cheaper doesn't equal better - just as more expensive doesn't equal quality. To offer a course for money, one MUST be an expert in that chosen field - be good at it and able to demonstrate it effectively.

    Interpretation is fine and actually necessary for a singer to grow. As an example; Frank Sinatra was the King of interpretation in terms of his phrasing, and arrangements of songs but the overall emotional intent of the song always remained.

    If you wanted to really interpret "Silent Lucidity" differently, you have to use different music. Singing some wild interpretation over a karaoke track of the original song simply makes it too opposite.

    Hi Kevin, thanks again for your contribution. I hope Robert doesn't mind, but I'd like to post the portion that was deleted, because it didn't bother me at all, and it's now part of the discussion, so it's relevant. And I very much appreciate and respect your concern.

    This was deleted for a reason, probably cause it was not fair and the start of a big argument and shit throwing. So ask a Rob or an other mod before repositing deleted comments.

    /Jens mod@TMV 

     

     Kevin, here's where I'd like to begin, because you and Robert are not seeing the glaring flaw in your arguments, which is simply this:

    You don't know me! You don't know what I know about the voice and about vocal training, vocal health and vocal safety. You've never taken my course or probably even watched a tiny sample of how I teach. You don't know my business model, my experience as a student of the voice, how I train, how often I train, why I do the exercises I do and in the order I do them. You don't even know why I chose to price my products the way I do. You know nothing about me. Can we at least agree on that much?

    So how in the world can either of you make judgements as to the quality and value of what I'm offering and how I go about it? Can't you see how silly this sounds? You're projecting your experiences with other people and other offerings onto me. You're committing the logical fallacies of false assumption and hasty generalization. It's not fair and it doesn't make any sense. And as awesomely funny as the phrase, "Made in China Knockoff" is, how could you possibly know this?

    I don't want to elaborate too much, but I have extensive experience in the fields of coaching and teaching, albeit with other subject matter. I'm a successful entrepreneur and coach entrepreneurs. I succeed at what I do because I care so much about doing it right. I've immersed myself in many of the best online courses out there and have read copious amounts of articles and books. I train 2-4 hours per day, 5-7 days per week. I spent 2014 taking two semesters of opera training from two of the best coaches and opera singers in all of Brazil. Each of them said I learned and improved at a rate they had never seen before. Their students are some of the best singers in the region.

    And, get this, I'm lining them up to eventually offer online skype lessons to my future students. They love what I know and what I'm teaching. They love me! They think it will be the perfect complimentary tool for what they are doing. They are presently professional singers with gorgeous voices. They perform lead roles in theater and opera at the best venues in South America, and one of them internationally. They are extraordinary teachers. I'm lining others up, too, but this is all new and they won't be needed for some time, still.

    All I'm asking, as I respect you and Robert and what you've accomplished, is to give me a chance, withhold judgement until you know me and my approach to teaching. It will take a year or more to slowly grow an audience and build out my content. All will get even better over that time. It's slow going because I have other work to do (that pays) and I do all the development myself,-video, audio, graphics, fonts, web design, articles, membership & LMS & payment plugins, marketing, advertising, social media, blah blah blah. It's a major undertaking for me and I'm happy to do it because this is my love in life and I feel that the world of singers and voice actors need another man like me. I don't know what else to say.

  8. That's just the thing, I've been kind of AWOL for awhile in the review and critique section and it was the uniqueness of this cover that caught my ear and brought me out of the woodwork.

    It honestly sounds a bit innovative and I'm kind of picky about innovation. It's not 'pretty or traditional' or whatever, but it's refreshing to hear something different. In a way I hope as Joe refines his performs style, he will keep some of the same characteristics. 

    Ronws got it right, it sounds artistic. It's not like a manufactured candy bar that rushes sugar to your brain and fills you with sugar pleasure but it gave me a different emotional response than other singers, and it wasn't bad, it was more like edgy and whoa.

    For me one of the worst experience I have in music is when something is 'mildly pleasant at best, forgettable at worst.' And I honestly feel bad when I feel that way. Joe gets a response from everyone here one way or another. It's provocative.

    So my advice is basically figure out what you want to do. You want to sell sugar, or you want to make something a bit crazy and push a few boundaries and press people's buttons and at what point do you want to draw the line between something generically pleasant and something uncompromisingly expressive, stimulating or challenging or whatever. It already sounded provocative to me, not unpleasant for me, but I have a higher tolerance for obscure/weird human expressions than some.

    If it were me, I'd add a bit more sugar in there, but you know, not everyone can be provocative and get a strong response from people. I would be hesitant to completely abandon that quality unless you have a specific mainstream traditional genre you want to fit into. 

    Sometime I wonder myself if I'm not doing it right if a certain section of the population isn't a little outrage, or butthurt hearing it. That's stimulation, it's response. I always dreamed of beig a performer where some people would be like, 'I can relate to that, wow that is expressive.' and others would be adamantly opposed, 'that is not the way to sing. You are terrible singer. Blah blah blah.' I'd prefer to be hated on than have most agree something is mildly pleasant. At least it's some kind of genuine feeling that was communicated.

    Once again, thank you so much for taking the time to post. I've received so much value from this first submission.

    You are a mind-reader of sorts, and you give me so much to think about. I've been afraid to provoke, so I keep it to myself, because I don't know how to sing any other way. I've felt like there's been a cool, "signature sound", buried under heaps of bad technique that's now rapidly revealing itself because of the workouts I do. I think I'd rather push boundaries and buttons, of course with better and better technique that comes in time with good training. The verb that came to mind reading your post is, "to polarize", which can be a good thing.

  9. Looks like it only kept one of them and then automatically opened up this comment entry box without any quotes. Hopefully, it will go away after I post this. I had cleared cached, quit the browser, etc. to no avail.

    Okay, adding this via edit: seems to be back to normal. A little forum software glitch. All better.

     

    And when I wrote "add to this post" above, I meant when I clicked into the "reply to this topic" field at the bottom.

  10. Hi Joe, I have listened to your track and read the comments by our forum members. Lots of great advice here and I can tell you from my band experience etc when you are doing any cover material from ICONIC singers lol people always expect it to sound just like the original artist. In some cases that may be kind of possible. There are certain singers with timbers and basic range similarities that make it easier to sing very close to the original artist. I agree with Roberts posts about striving and improving. There are songs I spent many years building the basic instrument up to a point where the execution was finally right. If you look through past pages I have many songs on here from very iconic singers and you can see on some I succeed more than others but I am always trying to improve as a vocalist and that shows in my own Original material maybe better than singing covers although even there I can see improvement on songs I tried to sing as a newbie etc. Never be discouraged, there was very little in my early singing that would have made other people think I should stick with it haha.

    Hi Robert,

    What's happening is that, even when I'm not quoting, but simply choose to add to post, I see dozens of quotes in the text box. When I click "submit", they seem to all go away. If I click on "quote", the same thing happens. For example, I didn't click "quote" for this reply, only the "add to post", and there are 16 nested quotes above where I'm typing right now. I'll click submit now, not sure if they'll stay or disappear.

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    You SHOULD sing on stage man! The sooner the better at this point! It's pretty much there! It's unlikely that anyone on this forum is going to be a billionaire famous singer anytime soon... having it be completely flawless... let's leave that type of stuff to Placido Domingo. You'd put on a pretty damn good performance man you're really close as is! Go for it!

    And yeah your high notes are very good! I don't hear a lot of clear, edgy Bb4s here.. let alone in a live setting! A lot of very solid runs with multiple A4s in them without pitch issues and while maintaining your individual timbre; that's not easy in the least. You have talent man you shouldn't need us to remind you of that =p

    I'm suddenly having issues replying with quotes...

    You've made my day. Thanks again so much. Only a few people have ever heard me sing, even though I do work very hard on my voice now. I'm finding I need some encouragement to give me a nudge to get out there and you're providing it.

    I have some friends in a popular local cover band who love to play music from Seattle (I'm from Seattle). Brazilians recognize the grunge classics, but wouldn't recognize Queensryche. They'd let me sing a set with them and I've yet to share a sample of my voice with them as I'm waiting until it's "just right". Brazilians are a very forgiving audience and they love rock.

     

  12. Weird. I don't know anything about classic rock and have no idea who this artist is and have never heard the song. I personally thought it was one of the better covers posted here...

    Yeah a few pitch issues here and there.. I think they should be very easy for this singer to fix.  If I were to hear this at 99% of the shows I've gone to I would think it was a great performance... Emotion, unique (not in a bad way) vocal timbre, skill with high notes.. 

    Different tastes?

    Thank you so much for taking the time to write. It's valuable to hear from someone who doesn't know the original. And I didn't mention this in the thread, but if I sing this on stage one day here in south Brazil, which is a possibility in 2016, no one in the audience will have heard it, so I'd be free of the Tate comparisons.

    Last night I checked the pitch of the performance with a pitch-plugin and, with the exception of a few spots in the first minute, the pitch is mostly spot on. I think some were hearing pitch mistakes because I wasn't following the original melody that their ears were expecting. Or, when they said "pitch", they meant to say "wrong melody". Something like that.

    And I'm in no way saying this is perfect or great, but it's so hard to sing those mid-4th-octave notes, the G4, A4, I think there's a Bb4 in there, with connection and edge while maintaining clear articulation, that I thought I'd get a pat on the back for that. So, thank you. It takes away the sting of yesterday's "below average amateur hour" hit and run.

  13. Hi Joe, I have listened to your track and read the comments by our forum members. Lots of great advice here and I can tell you from my band experience etc when you are doing any cover material from ICONIC singers lol people always expect it to sound just like the original artist. In some cases that may be kind of possible. There are certain singers with timbers and basic range similarities that make it easier to sing very close to the original artist. I agree with Roberts posts about striving and improving. There are songs I spent many years building the basic instrument up to a point where the execution was finally right. If you look through past pages I have many songs on here from very iconic singers and you can see on some I succeed more than others but I am always trying to improve as a vocalist and that shows in my own Original material maybe better than singing covers although even there I can see improvement on songs I tried to sing as a newbie etc. Never be discouraged, there was very little in my early singing that would have made other people think I should stick with it haha.

    Thank you, Musikman. One of the reasons I've been altering the melodies and mood of the cover songs I sing is to use them to practice creating "original" melodies, so to speak, and infusing the song with my own personality as a type of preparation, or transition, to eventually creating original music. I also work on originals, but I struggle with lyrics and timidity associated with sharing. Melodies come easy. I also train this way in an attempt to develop my own sound and style (i.e. avoiding any type of imitation of the original).

    And, yes, I forgot how much people compare the covers to the original iconic artist. To me, an at-home singer, these songs are to have fun with. You should hear me butcher John Denver, who is one of my favorite artists to sing.

    Another takeaway from the great feedback here is that maybe I'm better off fast-tracking the original work, as opposed to trying to more perfectly mimic great cover songs. It's a more terrifying idea, but could lead to more satisfying results in the end.

    Either way, yes,—work, work, work, striving and improving. The work is so fun. Having patience is the harder part. Thanks again!

  14. Again, I liked it as an artistic endeavor. Is it a world class rendition on this song? Maybe not. You have a good voice and could conceivably shine well on other songs. I don't think my voice is good on every song, even ones I enjoy singing. I was working on a cover of "Jaded" by Aerosmith. I really like that song but I just don't sound like Steven and so I may never share that one.

    But I could imagine you singing in public, yes, to applause, even.

     

    Thank you so much Ronws. I had a rough day yesterday after reading Kevin's comments, but I took them all to heart and had a great night training and singing. I didn't mention this, but in posting this song I'm taking a step toward over-coming a life-long fear of being heard singing by others. I'm now on the wrong side of 50 and feeling a "now or never" thing and am working hard to grow my voice to it's fullest.

    As a student, I'm coming from the place of singing WAY too hard, pushing too hard, trying to "pull chest" to the ceiling and so forth. I'm sure that strain can be heard in this performance. So the past 2.5 years of training have been all about backing that down. My false folds used to slam shut around Eb4 and each half-step after that was brutal to "push" through. I'm maybe half-way to where I care to be and I've only in the past couple months found how to navigate the passage while keep the false folds retracted. It's been amazing, and I'm not yet used to singing in this way, and when I sing a song I've sang for a long time, the old habits are more likely to jump in.

    Over the coming weeks I'll submit a few songs from other artists and I'll make a better attempt to stay close to the original and to communicate the lyric better. Thanks again.

     

  15. On the subject of interpretation, have you read the lyrics and tried to figure out what you were attempting to convey with each line? This is inherently a subjective process so I'd be hesitant to say anyone can is incorrect about the meaning of a song.

    But rather than worry about sounding like the original artist or not, sometimes I find it very helpful to look at the lines of a song as a story. Even then, it is possible to sing a song sarcastically, in third person, and so forth. But the further away you get from the 'generic meaning' of a song the more people won't get it, and dire hard fans might be miffed at your sacrilegious treatment. 

    This is a pretty famous example of a song being treated sacrilegiously, and probably equally appreciated and hated by various camps:

     

    As for the vocal training thing, I would probably just leave that alone for now. I personally have a fair amount of accumulated singing knowledge at this point from experience and the company I've kept (it's hard not to learn a bit about singing with so many singers and singing teachers here). I help a bit here and there when I can, but I wouldn't want to appear in a professional capacity or as someone with expertise. I have going on five octaves of vocal range, but for me it is not at all a measurement of my qualifications, because I consider many people more qualified. It's up to you to make the final decision what you believe on that matter.

    Anyway, I probably agree with Rob most that I can't tell where your vocal abilities are at, right now from one song. What is choice, what is not choice. But amateur art is art as well. There 'are' art scenes that aren't predominately learning reproduce and demonstrate traditional techniques in each field.

    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Do_it_yourself

    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Outsider_art

    There are comparably smaller, but not non existent audiences for this kind of art. So whatever direction you choose to go, its up to you. 

    Thank you, again. My biggest takeaway from this first submission has been that I need to pay much closer attention to communicating the intent of the lyrics. I think I'm pre-occupied with "sounding right", or "cool", or "powerful", as the expense of conveying the lyric appropriately. I didn't do that well at all here.

  16. I was just sent the link to this thread and have given said track a listen.

    This is not about interpretation - this is flat out amateur in too manyways. I'm sorry if you expected me to coddle Joe; the truth has to be said here. The song performance of this is below average. If a singing student sent this to me for review I would say the same thing.

    Your idea of pitch, melody, rhythm, emotional conveyance need  A LOT OF WORK. Its not interpretive, its being somewhat clueless in how to sing a song properly given its subject matter and emotional intent.

    Needs more work Joe...

    Hi Kevin. Thank you for the feedback. I don't at all expect to be coddled. Treated with courtesy, yes. Coddled, no. And I absolutely appreciate what you wrote. As I wrote above, I can sing this song 100 different ways. This is the way I chose and it didn't settle well with you and others. That's okay. It's useful to know.

    I know Robert deleted a portion of your post, but I'd like to comment on that anyway, since you took a swipe at me and others saw it. I hope Robert allows me to reply.

    I am not a performance coach nor have I ever claimed to be. I don't conduct private lessons of any kind and have never claimed as much. I've only just recently begun to create and offer an inexpensive, in-home vocal training course for people who can't afford private lessons with someone like yourself. I don't promote or link to my course in my signature line here, as others do. I may one day.

    I've lived in South America for 15 years. I'm surrounded by all kinds of young people who love to sing and want to sing better and can't afford private lessons. I realize that this is a problem for many singers all over the world, even in developed countries like the U.S. They are who I want to help most. And it's a great course. The feedback from my first few students has been excellent. I'm adding new material all the time.

    Also know that my voice connects over four octaves, from C2 to C6, though it's still rough at the edges. My intent is to fully develop the three octaves from G2 to G5 and this is becoming an easy siren for me to do, getting better by the day. I can do it across different vowels, with varied larynx positions, varied amounts of resonation, volume, and so forth.

    I'm first and foremost a a student of the voice. I openly demonstrate my voice to students and prospective students, explain my approach to teaching the voice, and encourage them to learn from other coaches and courses. I make it clear to them that I'm also one of the students at my school. There is full disclosure and I'm not the slightest bit ashamed of providing vocal training workouts for people to use at home and I stand by the quality of the course.

  17. Last night I listened to the original version and things make more sense now. I wasn't attempting at all to sing this like the original version, though I can see how listeners would expect that I was, and would be put off when it sounded different.

    This is the way I've come to love to sing this song over the years. I didn't realize how far I had drifted from the original version. The differences in melody and rhythm were conscious choices, for better or worse.

    I alter the melody, rhythm and mood of every cover that I sing, to varying degrees. I'm the only audience that I ever have, so if affords me the opportunity to sing the way I enjoy singing, a type of "creative karaoke", using my voice and the way I express myself.

    Or course now I realize that to share what I do requires that I consider the mindset of a different audience. I hadn't considered this.

    None of this is to say that I don't have work to do on my voice or the way I sing/interpret songs, and I hope no one thinks that's where I'm coming from. To the contrary, I train my voice every day and plan to do so for years to come. It's what I love most in life.

  18. Joe, I appreciate your willingness to be critiqued and open minded. It takes a lot of courage and says a lot about your character. It also is the shortest path to getting better, when you can set the ego aside. Since you are my customer out at the 4Pillars system, I'm going to give you a straight up answer.

    1). We all only heard 1 song, 1 take. It is difficult to make a sweeping judgement call and be completely fair to you, when all we have is 1 moment / sample, first try out of the gates... so I have to give you that caveat. However...

    2). The tone of your voice is complete adequate, if not more the adequate to sing in a way that an audience would love. So the basic physiology and formant colors your voice produces are ever bit just fine, however, you are not maximizing your potential in this regard because of a lack of training, strength, coordination and experience. The apparatus is there Joe, but the athletic ability to make it really come to life is not yet there.

    3). "The way you sing"... relevant to #1 above... Not only us... but you too... you can't judge the "way you sing" on one song, one take, one review, etc... that would be totally unfair to yourself and unrealistic. Apart from the fact that certain songs "sit" in peoples' voices better then others. We can't even determine if this is a good song for you or not because is so early and raw in your development. Frankly Joe, you don't know "the way you sing"... is this the way you sing? I hope not, because it sounds like you need a lot of work... but after you get that work done, "the way you sing"... will be a totally different thing Joe!  So... "the way you sing" today... or the "the way you sang" this song today?  NO, an audience will not jell with it Joe, to be honest.

    But, after you train, build strength, coordination, and do this damn tune over and over about 50 times, the probably will!  That is what the singing experience is for ALL OF US Joe... people that are really committed to making this a lifestyle. Even the best of on here, are still striving to get better and certain songs or movements of the voice. Maestro Kyle used to say, ".. the day you think your done, your done".  The process of getting stronger, gaining more experience and getting better never ends as a singer... Just keep going Joe... in your copy of 4Pillars...

     

    - Are you training The Foundation Building Routine in the program?

    - master the onsets!

    - Master the acoustic modes , the way TVS organizes the vowels and resonance.

    - Be sure to do a set of onsets + sirens with coordination & tuning onsets for 30 minutes. (T&R, Q&R, P&R, W&R, M&R)

    then...

    - Start training with the resistance training onsets with sirens to build the belt musculature. (D&R, A&R, C&R, Q&R).

     

    Joe, just so you know... we have all been here before, including me... Case in point... click on my Reverberation banner below in my signature... play the song, "Souls of Silence"... Joe, it took me about 3 years, before I could sing this song. And I wrote it!!!???  For three F****** years, I couldn't sing my own F****** song!? (... it could still probably be better... ), but it took me 3 years to work up to the ability to pull this off... I had to strengthen my belts (TA muscle) and get my coordination down for narrowing and learn to Edge better to get it to work... and just flat out... good old fashioned... train, train, train, train... I worked on this F***** every night and recorded it about 6 times... at some point, I didn't even like the F***** anymore , I grew sick of it... BUT... I refused to let it beat me Joe... No song, especially a song I wrote, was going to defeat me Joe... then about the beginning of this year, I finally got it to a point where it sounded decent... Like preparing for a marathon... I had to "train up" to it Joe as an athlete... Honestly, same goes for "Behind Diverted Eyes" & "Timeless Chains"...  Everyone here can tell you a similar story.

    That is the lifestyle of being a serious singer... 

    Hope this helps and inspires... 

    Thanks Robert! I love it all and understand. I appreciate the candor and that you guys are holding me to a high standard. It makes me want to work even harder.

  19. It's going to depend tremendously on the audience. An artier crowd looking to connect emotionally with an original performer, there is a chance in my opinion, if your songs are composed to suit your performance style. American Idol signing contests, definitely no.

    In a bar cover band, it might be iffy. It might depend on how much you were willing to sacrifice to sound 'more like the original.' In some ways, by singing covers we are amplifying the 'power of the formula' vs the power of 'individual expression,' as the musical formula has already previously worked in the past and many listeners find deviations from that formula frustrating, where as with an unfamiliar song listeners are forced to explore something as more of its own entity.

    As a singer songwriter, it would be a gamble (and honestly it is for anyone, but. Broadway and opera no way unless you cleaned up a whole lot and matched their stylistic requirements in addition to technical requirements.

    A great example is this, Queensryche, is known for being technically proficient and appreciated predominately for a certain sound. Even when Geoff Tate deviated from the sound he got a lot of flak from his own fans, so if this cover was to go out to Queensryche devout fans Rob is probably right.

    I guess the question is how well can you replicate a pitch and keep locked into a mechanical tempo if done intentionally? That's typically the safest route, but for people like me we can find it a bit sterile and are attracted to more 'wild and untamed' human expression. 

    Maybe try an open mic first. Try playing at a local park. If you have an art scene in your community check that out and see what they are up to. Maybe make some connections. Bar bands without formulaic sounds can scare of customers, so bars don't like that. Coffee shops are sometimes known for songwriter types, but if it's too edgy and loud they might spit out their coffee.

    Lou Reed hung out with Andy Warhol. In general I've found strange/outsider people like unusual music more on average than the average person. The more you deviate from the norm, the more you have to rely on abnormal listeners.

    Thanks again, I appreciate your feedback. Know that if I ever sang for a cover band, I would go out of my way to reproduce the songs as close to the original as possible. I know how that works with cover band audiences. I'm not getting my question across well so I'll let go of it for now. I'll submit another song or two in the weeks to come.

  20. If I had never heard this song I would probably hear a slight clash with backing track. Your voice sounds restless emotionally. The backing track sounds a bit tighter, polished, more controlled and subdued (which is a style Tate sung with).

    The melody structure, timing eccentricities, might work if the arrangement also had restless qualities that complemented it, or on contrast maybe even something even more mechanical, so the voice sounded strangled by the track and like it needed to break free.

    As is, it connected with me emotionally, but aesthetically I think either you or the track (even original) would need to give or take a bit either direction (tempo, pitch, etc).

    You are so spot on. I think about this a lot as I sing/train to several dozen covers on karaoke tracks, and always find myself wishing that the track could conform to the way I'm wanting to sing the song in my style. I have to work with the tracks I have, so there will always be some mismatch between how I'm singing and the track that was intended for the original singer.

    Maybe the overarching question I'm asking is, does my voice sound like I could perform in public at a sound level of competence? And, I'm referring to my voice and the way I sing as opposed to the quality at which I'm covering the song as it was originally sung, if that makes sense.

  21. I actually think this is going in a good direction. The emotions are very different than the original. I get like a cross betweeen Roger Waters ( Pink Floyd) and Lou Reed.

    When I hear it, I feel tension, anxiety, and despair, but also a sense of repressed or depressed affection. It sounds like a love letter from someone who can't express love for some reason (horrible life circumstance, or something else), and has a lot of charm.

    I do think if you pulled the pitch a little closer to equal temperament and the rhythm a bit closer to the beat, you could express these emotions while getting more approachable and accessible.

    I don't however believe these are emotions that can be expressed precisely. Very few people are 'desperately precise, mechanically anxious' and so forth. These emotions tend to affect motor control and I don't think those emotions would connect with me if it didn't have some of the characteristics of being a bit stilted, trembling, and out of control.

    I don't know if those are the emotions you're trying to express, but it works as a piece of art. It gets a response from me emotionally. The trick for a commercial performer would be to find the balance that works for their art between making that connection and also being approachable as a piece of music, which usually involves some degree of a formula.

    For me emotions are not formulaic, controlled, meticulous experiences at all. The sound of my voice when emotional is not that either. But music which is closer to the formula has more appeal to the average person aesthetically (harmony vs dissonance, meter, etc). So a lot of what makes me connect with music is the struggle between the emotional 'loss of control' and music having some kind of formula which is emotionless, static, without that struggle.

    Wow, thank you so much. Yes, you actually heard what I was going for (which happens to also have an autobiographical element). I remember Tate's original being more gentle, subdued, melodic, and I'm attempting to add more tension and passion, of sorts, to it.

    I'm getting the message about the technical matters here in the thread, so I will get to work on improved precision. I can sing it 100 different ways. Just working on finding a way that has some "wow factor". Thanks again.

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