2 cats in a dust bin

OK Jarom 

I going to give that Marry Poppings thing A try and will post back

Thanks

Gsoul82

Well if the pitch is just pressing the wrong key on the piano then there is need for some lessons

But on the other hand, if my vocal cords dont stretch to that key then there is little point trying

Should I look at "how to test your vocal range" on google thingy and post back resalts?

Singing lessons  $30 for 30 minutes well I guess we are only half way there to solicitors and accountants fees

How much training do you think I need?

Well I think thats about 3 people now that have told me "you sounded just like me when I started" 

So maybe I should not ditch this song after all

1 hour ago, 2 cats in a dust bin said:

12 hours ago, Jarom said:

 Doe ray me fa so la te doe. master that

supercalifragilisticexpialidocious

I just googled that and it appears to be a song

you dont actually expect me to sing that rubbish do you

11 hours ago, Jarom said:

 Doe ray me fa so la te doe. master that

supercalifragilisticexpialidocious

We keep using this magical word again pitch!

Singing lessons sound very expencive

Robert Lunte, dose a downloadable training course, would that do the job?

I was thinking of uploading another thread of another song but I don't know at the moment because I get all this advice but I don't understand what you are all talking about

I though when you said matching sounds using an insteament you where talking about matching vocal cord using a PC software 

But now do you mean listening to a piano key and trying to sing to it?

Anyway hear is what I  got from your idea of ear training

Record myself sing the original track with the original artist sing (no karaoke) then listen to it and do it all again

So hear it is 

https://app.box.com/s/s26rmww12wt7js0gs04r0ibvd9s7ij3a

And the one after

https://app.box.com/s/tw8um5u41m30a2jg53tqgzl6ci0bhjfv

OK 

I get the message I got it working in the end so best to put my opinions to one side and back to the recording

21 hours ago, ronws said:

This a slightly better recording. You are still coming in too hot on the mic, but at least it is only on the louder notes and not all the way through

And you are still off pitch

Do you mean to high on the notes high and dry, which I was told before where flat and needed lifting up?

11 hours ago, Gsoul82 said:

I listened to the recording in the quote above and the pitch is the biggest issue there, and it is an issue throughout. No worries though, because that can be fixed. Take Killer's advice up top and start looking into ear training exercises.

 

I dont know what you mean by ear training

And I dont know what you mean by pitch?

But are you saying this track is not two far off and dose not need ditching like the other one

Then I must be tone death because I listened to it and though it was OK
But obviously no one likes it so that is that
As said I need to forget the song or do the instrument thingy (what ever it is)

I realy do fail to see the logic to this I realy do.
Because as far as I can see streming is downloading just not saving the file that is all

We went through this a few years ago when some twerp moved into the flat above Rogers.
And Roger having a telephone and broadband decided to run a cable up to his flat and split the bill, line 50/ 50
Only problem is Roger could not get online because this guy was using all the data allowance.
Roger being a clever man who would read and use things like Wikipida and not waste his life on facebook youtube crap.
Where this guy spent all day streaming junk off youtube and pissed Roger off in the end because he refused to belive that he was downloading data and streaming was not downloading data it was something ells in his infinite wisdom.

So there you have it, if you want to watch/ stream that same video again then you have to download it twice
Faulse acconamy realy
You can download it but you have the option to open the file as well as save it too, so I dont see what anyones problem is realy

But never the less you have all made your minds up regardless of the above
So hear is the song I just did as an .mp3 and using drop box as well
https://app.box.com/s/ez0xb2k0zdxfxlso35luyy1ks0qw7pz2
Bit of a cold on my through at the moment but hay ho, should really crack on with it anyway 

This is becoming to be a bit of a joke now it really is

The link works fine for me as a download when logged out

So I have done this song again and done what I have been advised to do

I have used Reaper not audacity because audacity makes a mess of it all

But with reaper I can only save it as a .wav file

So please so if you can open this 

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B897xTc-9m8Bc0M5UDRFN0tOSVE

4 hours ago, ronws said:

If you do not have access to an instrument you can find tone files online

I keep hearing about this instrument thing and I have no idea what anyone is talking about

Please could you supply me a link that I can use

Thanks

I have managed to convert to .mp3 so hopefully you can now stream them

This is the one I did at full https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B897xTc-9m8BZE9xSVRXWE5kdnM

And this is done again played down https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B897xTc-9m8BSUlJSGVnTGFCR1U

Collin

Did you manage to download the .mp2 link, the one I uploaded first, or just the first one (the .mp4 video)

So are you saying I can work this song if I get vocal twang  exercise from a teacher/ coach?

All I can see from  diaphragmatic muscles is the it is a muscle used for breathing

Have you had singing lessons in the past for your self Collin?

14 minutes ago, Collin571 said:

it doesn't play for me.

You have to download these ones

Did you try it? what happened when you pressed the link?

I have paid and I am singed up to the "review my singing" but I am unable to to start a new topic in that thread
So please could you move this thread over to the "review my singing" thread

Anyway hear are 2 .mp2 files I did using audacity
I think the recording sound on Audacity is better then windows live camera
What do you think

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B897xTc-9m8BZXdLbEs2SlRxOEE
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B897xTc-9m8BVEUtLU84VFAtWE0

PS almost forgot

I did this one the other day with Audacity and for some reason it sounds a little different 

What do you think?

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B897xTc-9m8BODlaN2pXR1ZYR2s

23 hours ago, Robert Lunte said:

 

Be sure to upload an avatar to your profile if you could please...

Sorry I dont do social media sites; yes I use the net a lot but you wont wind my real name on google search 

What exactly can I get out of a teacher that will help me improve this song?

And do you think I have the potential to get the song to a professional standard?

Thanks

23 hours ago, Robert Lunte said:

23 hours ago, Robert Lunte said:

Review:

 

- Cat... you need to tune up... this is not in pitch... start by getting this in the right pitch..

Sorry I dont understand what you mean by this?

Hi there

I am pretty sure what I have provided is a streamable  link and not a downloadable one
It is hosted by "Google Drive"
I only have the most basic of playing and recording equipment which dose not allow good quality recording of the vocal spectrum I guess.
But hear is the link
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B897xTc-9m8Bb2ZidGd1eUZaejg

Will pop back in 24hrs to check this thread

So where do I want to be then?