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Hey guys,

I've been singing for about a year and trying to get better. My main inpiration is Craig David (r&b style). I have noticed that I can make several different tones. I have attached a couple covers that I perfomred in my home studio...again, please provide hones positive feedback.

BootyMan: http://sites.google.com/site/tsitalon1/Home/file-access/BootyMan1.1.mp3?attredirects=0

Whatsyourflavor: http://sites.google.com/site/tsitalon1/Home/file-access/WhatsYourFlava3.mp3?attredirects=0

Thanks,

James

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My first impression with Booty man that it starts of very pitchy...way to much effect on the voice. Interesting stuff thou...definately worth working on..I am interested in hearing just one vocal track so I can hear if the pitch issues are because the two voices are not on perfect pitch in areas.

Its not bad.

Whatsyourflavor - cool tune, very repetative thou...you need to develop that song its cool. Vocally, I would stick to one vocal track accept for the fade ins and back ups. I think that your voice could use a bit more personality; try adding some melody.

BC

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