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Not bad. My critiques would be;

A. Back away from the mic a bit. Your breathing was a bit distracting.

B. You need to bring up the guitar a bit. It was lost behind your voice.

C. You sounded a bit tense and nervous. I can relate to this. Get comfortable and let it flow naturally.

D. I like what you did around 1:10 or so. You gave it a kind of "rock-a-billy" feel and it sounded like you were starting to channel a little Elvis Presley there towards the end.

Keep it at it and post some more stuff. I think you have a good start. :-)

Btw, I'm no professional and I really don't know much, technically. These are just my opinions and what I'm hearing.

Eric

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