TMV World Legacy Member Andy Posted April 23, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted April 23, 2014 Good afternoon all! I'd love for some critiques and advice on how I can improve. Here's some issues I can think about already: Sounds like I'm pushing for the higher notes. Could be more clear with my diction. Pitchy sometimes. Piano skills are very lacking. The lower notes seem a bit uncontrolled? Thank you for your help! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Blameitonthevodka Posted April 23, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted April 23, 2014 Dayum your tone is absolutely beautiful! Honestly, I liked it so unfortunately I have no constructive criticism or anything negative to say? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Javastorm Posted April 23, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted April 23, 2014 I thought it was good. Your piano playing was fine, it was pretty consistent with your vocals. I think you handled the higher notes well, on "Darling" the G4's weren't pushed at all. The only diction problem I heard was sometimes the way you articulated "stand" sounded like your tongue was raised a little/your jaw was lowered. Overall I thought it was a good job, and on pitch. "The journey in between what you once were and who you are now becoming is where the dance of life really takes place." -B. De Angelis My SoundCloud Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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