napoleonboot

Craig - many thanks for listening and the advice.
 
Sadly, I am not playing the instruments. It is a group of online musicians I have worked with on-and-off for a few years, and this the 5th in a series of prog-rock tracks we have done over the last year, maybe building up to an album. I did used to play guitar with the same people , but I moved to vocals about 5 years ago and my guitar playing has been getting a little dusty since then,

This is an early version of an original song "The Game".
 
https://app.box.com/s/wkysh01q2qmx5oe35pof
 
Any advice on areas/spots for improvement is welcome  - including where I might put a harmony line?
 
Please excuse the "pops" in the backing, they will no doubt be eliminated before this is finished.