Thanks MDEW, sometimes it's good to get some encouragement that putting in the work will eventually be worth it.
Tommy, thanks for pointing that out, because I didn't even notice that on listen back. Wow, it's almost gone!
Listening back on this even after a few days of practicing on the points made, I can hear the issues now alot better. I don't know that I could fix all those things quite yet but I know better what I need to work on.
Cheers and have a great weekend.