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juliamontgomerymusic

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  1. That was good. :) Great job and a beautiful rendition.

    If I had to say one thing as a critique...and it's not even a critique...more of a personal taste thing, it would be accent.

    I mentioned to someone else I have this thing about accents :D I don't mind country music or if a song is meant to sound country and southern accents are placed in there. That's allowed! :D But if it's by accident then it sometimes doesn't fit. I don't know where you are from and if you even have a southern accent but on words with an "I" (an American I like the sound of "eye" not the Italian ee sound) you are giving in the ole' southern sounding "ah." Only in a couple of spots but that is why I point it out. It stood out to me because it didn't match the rest of the song which was not with any accent. I heard it very strong on the word minor at the beginning. "The minor fall." You say the mahner fahl." Unless you were over shading the vowel?" Either way it was too strong. There was another word later "Tied." Tahd.

    Like I said...minor points but as a listener it stands out for me because either the whole song is that way, and then it's ok because I then consider it a country version; or one or two words only for which I think of it as bad pronunciation.

    But I have to close by saying that was really sung well :)

    Thank you. I'll take that into account for future performances :)

    J

  2. Dont worry about improving that specific recording. If I were you, I would find a karaoke version of the song on youtube, and then record vocals on it using your computer. Maybe add some reverb/delay to make it sound nice.

    The recording you posted shows your talent, and I think that was your purpose. Now taking it further and start vocal training unless you have already, and put 110% of yourself into the music. Your young and you can reach the stars if you put the effort. :cool:

    Good luck!!!

    Thanks again :) I already have some training but I defiantly have a long time to continue to improve and pursue my vocals.

  3. Your voice is very pretty :) Could use a bit of refining, though, which lesson could help you with. I don't want to get too specific because I'm far from an expert, but it seems to me like you're up in your head a bit when you sing, which makes your voice sound a bit thinner than it could otherwise be :) Try using your chest voice a little more and that will really bring out your best sound. Good luck in any future singing endeavors :)

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