saltynotsour

Try to make the audio smoother if that makes sense like you the nice intramental and then your voice which is a bit jarring. Also, the line "I hate you" at the into is a bit jarring to the first into. But other than that good job!

I think that this is pretty cool. Maybe try opening your mouth a little more because you seemed a bit tight-lipped and make the s more pronounced and crisper. I think the higher notes could use some work but other than that sounded good.

I think you should try a song with less vocal pitches and something with more bass. Try city of stars by ryan gosling with a few vocal warmups