JustaMartin

Hello there,
I would start working on your pitch. You notice it at the end, when the music already ended. Without the music it sounds better, because you're not hitting the right pitch yet.
After that you can try to work on the emotion! You sing it rather emotionless  Try to put a little more character in it.
If you work hard I guess you can make that song.

It's good. There's room for improvement though. Keep it up!
if I was a judge in the X Factor, I would say "yes".
My point is you sound good, but you could improve on your voice; needs a bit more work.