Please critique my singing - feel like making love

[tomsere]

Please critique my singing, Im performing 'feel like making love'

http://youtu.be/YR_8TKXVkEw

[ronws]

I was thinking of a different, older song, by the same name.

Anyway, sounded good to me. I think you've got a natural feel for r & b and some of the softer hip-hop.

I could hear some breathiness, but mainly, that is you breathing in noticable places. If you get into slowing down the exhale when you sing, you can sing longer with less breath takes.