Please evaluate my singing?

[Daniela95]

I recorded myself singing a few lines. Here's the link:

http://www.tunescoop.com/play/313930363432/memo-wav

Please state the good and what I can work on. Also, it sounds more airy than it actually is because I had to convert the file and it doesn't sound as clear as it originally was.

[Adoney]

Sing louder