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What You Gna Do!!!

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It's a good song. My aesthetics would prefer less effects and less harmony vocals, as they become numerous and compete with the lead vocal line. You have the talent and ability of Joe Jackson. And you should stand in your own light, rather than the shadow of layered tracks. Sometimes, less is more, at least in my humble opinion.

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hey thank you for the feedback :), i tried some layered stuff because when i originally wrote the hook line (What you gna do when you alone tonight) it sounded empty and i must of got a bit carried away... i recorded it in my living room and it was quite a shoddy recording so i put some reverb on it to boost it and took a lot of the low end out and brought a little of the high end up to brighten the sound up... i will keep this in mind for the next track that i write :)

thankyou :D

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