TMV World Legacy Member Danny_Gatward Posted June 28, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted June 28, 2014 hey guys this is my first attempt at songwriting with me singing so please be honest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member ronws Posted June 28, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted June 28, 2014 It's a good song. My aesthetics would prefer less effects and less harmony vocals, as they become numerous and compete with the lead vocal line. You have the talent and ability of Joe Jackson. And you should stand in your own light, rather than the shadow of layered tracks. Sometimes, less is more, at least in my humble opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Danny_Gatward Posted June 29, 2014 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted June 29, 2014 hey thank you for the feedback , i tried some layered stuff because when i originally wrote the hook line (What you gna do when you alone tonight) it sounded empty and i must of got a bit carried away... i recorded it in my living room and it was quite a shoddy recording so i put some reverb on it to boost it and took a lot of the low end out and brought a little of the high end up to brighten the sound up... i will keep this in mind for the next track that i write thankyou :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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