TMV World Legacy Member denisisic Posted July 30, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted July 30, 2014 Heeey.. i need honest critique about this song.. what is good and what can i do better for next time?? link down below efd404e8f28b09995af97dbc5e21f389 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Garnet Posted August 8, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted August 8, 2014 iMPROVE: Less growling, it's used way too frequently for me and feels like a bad habit you've developed. Rolled vowel sounds give this a cabaret feeling for me e.g. instead of a short baby you hold it like BAY-BAY-UH this again feels like a bad habit and sort of cabaret. Nothing wrong with cabaret, but its not my cup of tea. Sometimes your held notes fell under pitch Liked: The verses were really pleasant and nice. Your emotion seemed genuine and it definitely felt like you were convicted to the song, even if the energy in terms of the growling and things felt like a little over the top. www.soundcloud.com/yuriee-1 - my soundcloud www.youtube.com/user/princessgarnetxvii - my youtube www.audio-city.net - singing forum! Join for competitions, feedback, and community. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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