Male - Edge Of Glory

[denisisic]

Heeey.. i need honest critique about this song.. what is good and what can i do better for next time??

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[Garnet]

iMPROVE:

Less growling, it's used way too frequently for me and feels like a bad habit you've developed.

Rolled vowel sounds give this a cabaret feeling for me e.g. instead of a short baby you hold it like BAY-BAY-UH this again feels like a bad habit and sort of cabaret. Nothing wrong with cabaret, but its not my cup of tea.

Sometimes your held notes fell under pitch

Liked:

The verses were really pleasant and nice.

Your emotion seemed genuine and it definitely felt like you were convicted to the song, even if the energy in terms of the growling and things felt like a little over the top.