Hi buddy
My thoughts:
With a good coaching you will make it for sure. The breathing/support technique is what you have to work on. The placement also is important, for now it's moving all the time. In the verse, listen to J.Labrie is more whispering it and you seem to 'chest it' too much. I don't know the exact terms ( really not a pro), some will explain it better, but you force too much on your throat. I would add to not take care of singing volume too much
But for 3 months of practising i think it's really good, some notes are very high! The abilities are here, just need to shape that voice ;-)
Another thing, maybe don't try to force and imitate Labrie on the high notes, what i do for me is that i try to catch the overall sounding but try also to do it with my own voice (eay to say, hard to do).
Keep on rocking Gerald!!!