Felipe Carvalho

@ronws hahaha to be honest I didnt think so either! Took me a while to figure something that worked. Thanks for the words on the mix, I did work this one quite a bit more on that regard

@killer and bono Thank you guys!

@aravindmadis Thank you my fried. I will try to put something together when I have the time, I will let you know!

Hello man!

Well one good point is that it is sounding relaxed. Is it comfortable?

The bad part is that it is indeed nasal as it goes . Also, when you began the second verse, "circus life", you let it fall from the position and was even a bit airy. 

Try this, do the same you do currently, with slight changes. First try to just open more your mouth. Then, think of a SLIGHT yawn, you should still feel it the same, almost as if going through the nose, but when recorded the nasalance should be gone.

Hope it helps!

Oh btw, dial back the backing vocals and try using panning to separate them

hahaha well if I became famous I missed it too Rob .

@olanyg Thank you!!!

@m.i.r hehehe yes! thats it. Losing it I know I am, but at least its not brain damage yet, thanks man

@Singing thank you my friend, a lot

Hey there, first recording I send on the new forums.

Hope you guys enjoy it

https://app.box.com/s/c5ttf3yee0rtsat2383cf8eijsdybcl1

Let me know how its sounding please!

Strange, I am almost sure I replied this thread before...

Thank you all for listening!

Robert the whole thing was a mess to be honest.

bono and rowns yes thank you guys! I will see if I can do something about it later, didnt want to redo the take.

m.i.r thanks for the words man, understood!

bzean thanks man!

Guys I really am getting a dejavu here. Didn't I reply to you already?

Awesome as always Chris. 

Aelpee Oh thank you my friend, for the words and for listening it all . Brave soul haha

Gnee Thanks man! Oh I can imagine how that is like, I have one of these little ones (1 yo girl) too.

ronws Thanks! haha I will

Thanks for listening and your words Marcus. Yes you are dead on about the pitch! Thank you .

This one was on my TODO list for a long while, getting it out of the way . This is one of the songs that when I began studying, was completely out of my capability, did not get past the first verse.

https://app.box.com/s/ifz9wjnq90k57wsn68a8

Everyone that listens and drops a few lines, thanks a lot!!!

Felipe

Enkay. I think you should quit, pursue a carreer as a Hokey player and the name of your firstborn should be Mark.

You understand that I am not the one who should be deciding this stuff right?

As Clint said everyone can learn. But of course not everyone will be a singer. And it probably will not be easy either.

After you decide, then I'll take a listen. Still, what do we do when we want to learn something?

Good Luck!

Hey guys, updating this one, redid the takes to clean up the distortion, hope it is sounding better!

https://app.box.com/s/8sxs1q2dj4zvse2vz54y

Great song from Christina Perri that I did as a gift for someone very special

https://app.box.com/s/glrcullyyzhlolyah2sk

Hope you guys like it! Let me know!

Mivke, Martin and David thank you guys :)

Bro, did you remove them all? :(

I like this one a bit better, but there is a lot of room to improve here man.

Try working more on this song, and try to make the articulation of the whole lower range more clear and strong. Open more, allow it to close a bit ONLY when you attack the highest points.

Did not like this man.

Airy, lacking energy and nasal. Take simpler songs, nail it down first and start from a more solid foundation. Try to use more volume when singing, and stick to the lower range first.

Hope it helps!

Hey Marcus, I just took a listen. I really did not like it much man.

I felt a lack of attention to the song structure, I think you are trying to use the right energy, but it´s a bit lost, there are like 4 different "kinds" of voices on the song. The lows are a bit prog metal, some stuff sounds like early Mike Patton (you should keep that, I really like it), others more pop. It´s not homogeneous, makes sense?

And despite all these variations, there are problems on the melody line and rhythm, this breaks the whole song no matter what you do.

I agree it needs to open indeed, and not just the highs.

Hope it makes sense!

Thank you both Adolph and Rob! :)

Dan, think I still use a tip you gave me for that beginning. Thanks for the words man!

Phil thank you man

ronws Thanks man!!

geno knee and David thank you guys!!!

Adolph I will right away.

sange and Jabroni First thanks for the words guys. There are of course differences in execution, and Geoff Tate is a monster, I did not do anything other than how I normally would sing except that this song is indeed high. More difficult than what he did, I would not say, I think that different is a better word, if you notice the E5 for example and listen to how he did it and what I am doing, you will see that there is a difference in the registration too.

Its a strong support but still within whats normal and expected. Makes sense?

Seems it disappeared, here is my version!!!

Did it very crude, to follow the rules of the challenge. Accoustic setting, no fx, hope you guys like it!

Edit: fixed the link

Exactly! :)

Well its not sounding good man.

A lot of things are indeed out of pitch, but still some are on pitch so you are getting to match it depending on what is going on, you are having trouble to identify the intervals.

Take a song that is more simple for you, and try nailing down one phrase at a time, maybe using an instrument to help you. GL!

Sounds really good, and very fun! I dont understand one word haha, but it is still fun :)

sls haha well, I think most of the stuff in the Seattle scene was heavily influenced by them, I agree its a different band, but AiC is a big part of everything that came from there. I have no problem with "grunge" but I also dont like a great deal of stuff that is under the tag .

wabba Thank you man!!

Olem haha thanks man. I hear you, and thanks for the careful listenning, it is indeed off

ronws Its one hell of a song... And Layne had his way of making everything that is already heavy and dark become even more disturbing, the lyrics are perfect. Thanks for listenning and for the words man.

Hey Keith thanks man, it was about time I gave it shot on DT

Thanks ronws, I will let him know for sure.

gnee do check it man, tons of great stuff!!

Xamedhi ahahah thanks man, I understand perfectly, but its kinda on the opposite side of what I do, it would sound weird and I would probably mess it all up ahhaha. I did try to do a few things more towards his style, just avoided the obvious ones.

And thanks everyone :)

Really cool stuff man . More!!!!!