acoustic cover - Not a Second Time - Beatles/Lennon

[Jeremy Mohler]

Any and all feedback welcomed, had to drop the key on this one considerably to be able to do it comfortably but still spotty.  Thanks in advance for the time.  

http://picosong.com/A9wD/

[Gneetapp]

I liked it Jeremy. You have a very nice soothing tone that matches the song. I never heard the original, but I think you did a good job. It is a work in progress, as you can still fix pitch and intonation in some areas. In some times your voice reminded me of Roy Orbinson. I think you could give this song a Roy feel if you just raised more your soft palate. How many steps did you lower the song, and why? You sound as if you could sing it higher. Additionally, I felt like you sounded a bit unsure/shy. Cheers

[ronws]

I remember the original (of course, darn it.) And I also liked it and agree with Gneetapp's comments, otherwise. You could really do this right. Maybe simplify the vocal melody to something more managable. And, I really liked the guitar work.

[Jeremy Mohler]

Thank you both so much for taking the time, I think your criticisms are definitely on point.  I did lower the song quite a bit, probably too low for my voice but unfortunately any higher would have also been too high. Also, I'm a big fan of Roy Orbison so I appreciate the comparison.

I will probably work on centering the pitch and then see if I can eventually raise the key without hurting myself.  Thanks again.