Please, tell me how I can improve my singing

[L06383424H]

http://soundcloud.com/l06383424h/littlelamb

Thanks It's just a little something I whipped up a few minutes ago.

[DoverOs]

uhm, not sure what the goal was, If your going for a vibrato effect, use a buzzing E vowel, versus your open sounding vowels. and let your voice bridge into the lower and upper notes, because it sounded like you were locking your larynx into a single spot, unless that was what you were shooting for.

[L06383424H]

Thanks a lot It's a little late right now and I need to get to bed but ill really listen and make another recording and ill modify my voice and do another song probably tomorrow.

[L06383424H]

Okay, bro I just got done recording this in my recording studio, with your suggestion in mind.

http://soundcloud.com/l06383424h/littlelamb-exstended

Check it out and tell me if you think it's improved any I'm not sure if I was able to really interpret you suggestion correctly but check it out.

[DoverOs]

I like it a lot, sounded good. dunno where to go from here, but I would say, work on sustaining notes!. if you ever have to sing a gig where they have crappy audio equipment, you really need to sustain your notes to get a melodic effect. something that everyone needs to work on!

[L06383424H]

Alright, so I recorded a vocalmentral and it's basically an instrumental.

http://soundcloud.com/l06383424h/instrumental

Then I mixed both tracks because I know how sometimes instruments make people sound better and I think I'm onto something:

http://soundcloud.com/l06383424h/littlelamb-extended-with-music

Thanks so much for the complements you made my day and really improved my singing. I had to upgrade to Audacity I've been using Windows Recorder that comes with windows xp.

[L06383424H]

I'm trying to figure out really what's next for my vocal achievements you said you didn't know were to go from there but this is something I really need to figure out.

[Guest]

Please don't take this the wrong way, I'm just a little confused:) I'm willing to admit that it might be me...maybe I'm just ignorant to the fact that what you are doing may be an actual technique. Maybe I should be doing it also!

But are you just reciting a nursery rhyme? And for your so called "backing music/instruments" you're just using your voice to mimic instruments I don't get it. Why not just find a backing track and sing something?

Or maybe someone is just yanking our chain? :cool:

[L06383424H]

Sorry, I'm not sure what you're saying, did I do something wrong? Did you not like the 'backing music' originally and uniquely created by me?

[Seth]

Okay.

a lot of this is out of key, and what is not out is monotone. It was as if you were trapped between reading aloud, rap, and singing. The melody was a bit awkward, and more like a poetry recitation.

I don't intend on being cruel. But there is a lot to work on here, if you are willing to work, you'll improve. I'll leave it to the more experienced forum members to help you with plan of attack.

[L06383424H]

Thanks a lot Seth I really do appreciate it. I'd love to have more advice from other members I can't wait.

[chadherrella]

Youve got a voice for Rock songs....have you tried doing a cover of "Can't cry hard enough" - by bellefire?