TMV World Legacy Member SophiaGrayce Posted February 8, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 8, 2013 Please critique Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member MDEW Posted February 9, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 9, 2013 :) I have nothing to contribute as far as a critique. I think that was beautiful. A lot of people here have covered this song. Maybe that is why there hasn't been more responces. I listened a couple more of your songs on Youtube. I enjoyed them very much. Please continue to sing and post songs here. There are many people here who can help if you have trouble with a particular song or phrase. "You need a strong foundation to reach the heights." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member JonAshEn Posted February 9, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 9, 2013 Wow, I really like your lower range. It's so pure sounding. Did you get slightly tired towards the end of the song? It sounded like things might have been tensing up a bit... One of the things I have been working on is vowel modification, and that might help you out as well, it takes some of the weight off when done correctly, and helps keep you from straining or getting tense. Nice job though, it's a beautiful song, and you sing it well. I'm so jealous of your recording setup! Thank you for sharing that. Jonathan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member SophiaGrayce Posted February 9, 2013 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 9, 2013 Thanks Jonathan, I need to work on it more, it's kinda hard to get use to. Thanks for the comment. ~Sophia~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member mvrasseli Posted February 9, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 9, 2013 Nice song, I did a cover from it too. I agree with JonAshen, it seems a bit "tense" in the high notes though it was really good at all. Nice smile in the begining :D [url=http://marcusilva.blogspot.com]Blog[/url] ɸ [url=http://www.jamendo.com/br/artist/Marcus_Rasseli]Jamendo[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member David Posted February 11, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 11, 2013 Humm... when you get to the part of " When she cuts your hair, etc..".. you get too nasally... try cutting back the mask, and raising your chest voice more to tackle it... it will add more color / flavor to the sound.. Too much over emphasis on the cry factor (maybe their's a god above..e tc..).. Then you got too nasally / mask for the next part... Your high notes (halleUUUU) is spot on... well done\ there.. Cheers, David. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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