TMV World Legacy Member mr-leonor99 Posted February 9, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 9, 2013 what do you think of this ? http://picosong.com/nFDj/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member David Posted February 11, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 11, 2013 wow 17 or so views, no comments... Anyway, I'll state that I think you have great tone.. You need to support more to project better.. sounds too "sleepy" .. but if you project better you can make it interesting and exciting... You have a nice tone for this type of song.. Cheers, David. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member MDEW Posted February 11, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 11, 2013 Sorry I missed this earlier. This is worth putting time into. It sounds like you are not confident with this yet. Like you are still working on it. If you haven't yet. Work on this like you would any song from another artist. Write the words down the way they are now and go over the parts one verse at a time. That way it will not keep changing every time you sing it. "You need a strong foundation to reach the heights." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member mr-leonor99 Posted February 11, 2013 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 11, 2013 thank you ! yes I'm still working on it, and you're right MDEW it changes every time I sing it lol, I'll work on it part by part like you suggested, and I'll use more support, and repost it so you tell me how it is thanks again DAVID, MDEW ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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