TMV World Legacy Member mr-leonor99 Posted February 26, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 26, 2013 here is a new song recorded on a camera I want to have some opinions(its in french so you wont understand...but just give it a try and tell me if you like lol) the lyrics in english : (en ce moment meme===>right now) right now I'm thinking of the futur there are many things I want to be I'm thinking of time, hoping to grow and sudenly I'm scared, when death is all I see right now I'm thinking of the past this is to much for me, I've had more than enough their are many memorys I want to erase from my head get as far as I can from these classified files and now I'm between those two they just don't stop hurting me they want me to forget the only thing that really exists and what is the past ? what is the futur ? one is dead, the other will be dead we are always chasing them, we forget to live right now, just get them out of our heads chorus lalalalal solo right now, as I'm writing this poem as the ideas are coming easily all this time that I pased to understand making that man who is me, is the only reason why they keep on fighting I now I have to work on the pronunciation, but, as I'm trying to avoid nasality it makes it hard to get good diction please answer http://picosong.com/n5W6/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member mr-leonor99 Posted February 28, 2013 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 28, 2013 up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member MDEW Posted February 28, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 28, 2013 Maybe no one knows how to critique songs in French. :/ I like the concept of the song. It sounded like you were in tune with the music. I wish I could give a better responce but I just don't know how to rate this. I've heard you sing before and I like your voice. "You need a strong foundation to reach the heights." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member mr-leonor99 Posted March 1, 2013 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 1, 2013 yes I was just looking for a critique to the whole song, because I also listen to songs in languages I don't understand, still I like it haha thanks MDEW it really makes me happy that you said that you like my voice, because I don't know why, but at this moment, I don't like my own voice lol that weird tone that I have, its just not a singers tone, maybe it will get beter with work, but, the voice man the voice, its just not a normal human voice lol, whenever I listen to other male voices even if they don't have technique, if one sings you get a "good male voice" you get music, if he works it a little bit he will be good, but mine is just...hum weird ? I don't find it beautifull to listen to do you really like my voice ? really ? why ? do you enjoy it like every other male voice ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member MDEW Posted March 1, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 1, 2013 Every one has times when they do not like the sound of their voice. It is natural. John Lennon did not like the sound of his voice. Neil Young has a unique sound to his voice but there are songs that he sings that wouldn't sound right without that type of voice. Sometimes the musical accompaniment will effect the perceived sound of the voice. Do not get discouraged. Keep singing. "You need a strong foundation to reach the heights." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member mr-leonor99 Posted March 1, 2013 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 1, 2013 thanks MDEW :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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