CoenvB Posted June 17, 2013 Share Posted June 17, 2013 Hi all! Here is an other song I recorded, I would like to get some comments on it so I can improve myself https://www.box.com/s/7xq4pui31desfmsz7ido Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ronws Posted June 17, 2013 Share Posted June 17, 2013 I liked it. Though I must admit, being an old smart-aleck, I was expecting a duet between George Peppard and Mr. T. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElWin Posted June 18, 2013 Share Posted June 18, 2013 Very good in terms of matching the melody etc of the original. I would maybe say that a bit more projection is needed as although Ed Sheeran has a soft voice it is not as quiet. Alternatively you could use a compression effect in the mixing stage to boost the volume of the quietest parts but I actually think you should work on increasing your volume in parts. The dynamics in any song are quite important and if you listen to Ed's delivery on the "she don't want to go outside" you'll hear how he uses dynamics to good effect. Otherwise really good - you have the right tone for that kind of song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CoenvB Posted June 20, 2013 Author Share Posted June 20, 2013 Thank you and I'll give it a try! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Bounce Posted June 27, 2013 Share Posted June 27, 2013 Ed Sheeran's songs are deceptively hard to sing. You have to get that balance of soft carefreeness with that twangy distortion he pops out here and there when he leans in on certain phrases. I think you did a good job, just have to work on getting more intensity while still staying nice and free Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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