Feedback Pls. :) When I Was Your Man FULL COVER

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My last recording before my laptop died. Recorded on a nice grand piano in a big room all alone on a Sunday night.

Crashed a couple consonants too hard, but trying some different tongue positions for the A (as in cat) and EH (never) vowels that seemed to do okay.

How was it for y'all? ;)

[MDEW]

:) Not bad. A little slower than Bruno which gives it a different feel. Your voice has a nice tone to it. A couple of notes sounded a little squeezed but did not sound like you were struggling. All in all Good job. :)

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Thanks, MDEW! Can you point some of those spots out so I can look into them further? I know some words I feel like I was retaining just smidge of constriction but had (or added) enough support to make it work (or not struggle super hard) in this case... I agree that there is definitely plenty of work to be done still! :)

[MDEW]

" I WANT you to know" Just before the Highnote slide. There is no doubt that you can do it. It was just a little shakey this time.

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Ah I see! Yeah, I wanted to try to emphasize that note somehow... perhaps if I could hone my rasp/grunt technique and support more carefully it would be more emotive and less strainy.