Help with my monotone singing(with link)

[xperience2]

HI.I sing on pitch ,but it still sounds blah...There is no life in my singing at all.I think maybe I have rhytmic problems,or lack of dynamics,or something else? Help me

http://picosong.com/CBgg/

[AmirMaor]

link broken ...:(

[MDEW]

HI.I sing on pitch ,but it still sounds blah...There is no life in my singing at all.I think maybe I have rhytmic problems,or lack of dynamics,or something else? Help me

http://picosong.com/CBgg/

For this song 2 things stand out.

1. you are a male( if not forgive me and try singing an octave higher) the song is by a female.

2. I did not hear the original singer singing. This is more of a talking on pitch song.

There is no room for any dynamics in this type of song to work on.

Sing something that has some melodic movement and dynamics to it.

[xperience2]

There is a lot of dynamics in this song.

[MDEW]

As with any song if you concentrate on pitch and not the expression you will sound dull. Do not sing it like you are reading from a book on pitch. Sing it like you are telling the story to someone in person.