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  • TMV World Legacy Member
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fixed version,hope it is better now,link is updated,tell me what u think,thanks in advance :)

I should also mention that I'm 16 and started singing about a month ago

https://soundcloud.com/someonesomewhere123/iris-goo-goo-dolls

  • TMV World Legacy Member
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This is so much better, I can't really compare to the first. This is the way for you to do this song. With only one fix, which you don't have to do for this recording. On "broken," it sounds like you sing brok - oon. I think it should be brok - eh - n but that is a personal articulation preference of mine. You were on pitch and in the same key as the music and you captured the feeling of the song. I liked this. And, really, good work for a young man like you. Not that age matters. Singing is timeless, remember that. I sound as young as you and I bet I am as old as your father, if not older than he is.

Anyway, good stuff, do that some more.

  • TMV World Legacy Member
Posted

Thanks for the feedback,I wonder did the voice overall sounded pleasant and nice ? And did the high notes sound bad ?

  • 2 weeks later...
  • TMV World Legacy Member
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I liked it! I think your voice tone is a great match for this piano version. But to make it even better, you could improve the pronunciation of a few words. I was wondering in which key you played the song. Good job man, Keep on Rocking!

:cool:

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