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Yo Igor!!!! That was incredible brother! The notes were clean and full and very powerful. Then when I think you can't do any more, at around 3:25 you took off into the stratosphere, up, up and away. Wow! Tommy

Fantastic! I have to agree, one of your very best. :)

Your welcome Igor. And again, I understand completely. The bottom line, as I said, the song was good; and the important parts, ie, the singing and music, were very good IMO. If I heard that song on the radio I would not change the station! That says a lot Tommy

Hey Igor, Let me start by saying that I liked it very much. There is something very catchy in that tune that kept me interested even though it isn't my genre. Very good; and your vocals were great IMO. I do have two critiques. One is personal taste and the other is language based so it really isn't a bad critique I know English isn't your first language so I am considering that. But a couple of spots in the song seemed to be poor English. The sentences weren't put together right and didn't make sense according to proper English. One example "Your stronger than ever knew." There should be a "you" in there. "Your stronger than you ever knew". There is another sentence somewhere also in the song that is wrong. The personal taste thing. I'm into blues and thus feeling in songs. I follow lyrics and try to connect emotion with lyrics and the rhythm of the music. So when I listen to music I listen for this and it is what connects me with the song as a listener. It is what hits my soul. You hit that big note on the word "stuck" and that was great. However, for me, I wondered why. I didn't feel the song lead me to that big note nor did the lyrics draw my emotion toward a big note that for me would be for an emphasis on a thought or emotion. Again...not a bad thing in general...but "for me." I felt it was hitting a big note just for the sake of hitting a big note I like to be guided and manipulated as far as feelings go and then set up for the big note. It is the building of tension and then resolving it. One more note. I'm not sure what rove means (then maybe I'm just illiterate ) I am assuming it is something to do with roving? Like a rover? Nice job though....good stuff. Tommy

Critique is a funny thing; especially on internet forums. I really think that in a medium such as this the first thing people do is to start to listen closely for misstakes or "perceived" mistakes or any other wrong doings. But in the normal really real world, listeners would only listen and either like what they would hear overall or not like it. I honestly can't critique anything technically and as far as the song as a whole... I loved it.