mr-leonor99

yes lol but I'll try to get more serious about it from now on

I liked it :D

yes I sing other peoples songs of course, I get my inspiration from them :)

wierd, but kinda cool, thats the effect I wanted lol I didn't study music and my knowledge is very restricted, so I'm doing all by the feeling, I don't know if I can finish a song someday lol, but I'll try :)

what I noticed is that you were not singing but talking, I think that you must first of all feel the music, did you hear the backgroud ? its a very loud music, you need to follow the spirit, for the technique you wait for the professors lol

I just made this and somehow I like it lol what do you think ? http://picosong.com/nykS/ the lyrics of the head voice part aren't clear so I will write it tiiiiiiime tiiiiiime tiiiiiiime deaaath sooooon hooooome deaaaath sooooon hoooome woooorld liiiiifee eaaarth wooork jooob wiiiife eaaaaarth sciennce money stuuudy woooork tiime.... tiiime...

you have a very nice tone, I really enjoyed this but you should use more vibrato like thevoiceofhearty said, especially on the "leaaave" and "with you" :)

what can we do in front of this ? nothing just shut up...and listen...

that was good man, but you could use a little bit of vibrato to make it even better, for the blues/country style, I think that you are great but wait for the Professional opinions ^^, from my point of view, as an amateur, I found it very good :)

thank you ! yes I'm still working on it, and you're right MDEW it changes every time I sing it lol, I'll work on it part by part like you suggested, and I'll use more support, and repost it so you tell me how it is thanks again DAVID, MDEW !

what do you think of this ? http://picosong.com/nFDj/

10/10 dude that was great if you're like me not aiming to get a 4 octave rockstar voice and just the common g2-A4 range then I think that you got it it sounded Professional for me

thanks man mathew is my favorite singer, and teacher lol, I listen to him all day, and I learned a lot from it, still learning can you please tell me what you noticed about the singing, so I work on it, I tried to lower my larynx to be less nasal(I have a problem with my nose it makes me sound nasal I'm pursuing a treatment but I'm not sure it will work...) I'll try to cover unintended ::)

http://picosong.com/nFFR/ hit me hard, so I fall, to get up stronger

as a listener, who is not professional at all, I say that I liked you're voice, really :)

good singing man ! I really enjoyed this till the end !

I don't think its a good Idea, you post you're stuff so you know if its good or bad, so you know what you should work on, if its not the purpose then its useless

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oh man... to be honest, I didn't like the song, its horrible, you use to much vibrato, and the song(if we call it like that) is really repetitive, not good, nooot good so : vibrato is good but don't use it to much !!! a song is made like this : introduction-verse-bridge(you can skip that if you want)-verse-(bridge)-chorus don't repeat the same melodie again and again and again and again and again and again but I belive that if you remove the exesive use of vibrato, you'll get a good voice, I liked the tone of your voice, and I enjoyed the song at the begining, until I noticed what I noticed then I stoped(I didn't finish the track, I couldn't finish the track) no hard feelings man, you'll be really disapointed, but work on what I said and I'm sur that your next track will be great !

why aren't you famous ? omg I bow to you're greateness !

really liked that, a great performance, keep it up and thanks for sharing :D

yeah technique is something that you get if you train, but a nice tone is something given to you by nature ! so work on your technique and I'm sure that you'll be great !

thanks sir, I will save money to buy the book, cause in morrocco, we have the DH and 1$=10dh this will cost around 3000dh, a big amount of money for a moroccan so buying the book will be tough, but I can do it, and I want it so bad so I'm surely gonna do it, I was saving for an electrico-acoustic guitar, but I'll sacrifie it for now, I really have to get a strong technique ! I guess this is the disadvantage of living in a 3rd world contry and for the master classes, I won't be able to do it I'm just an economic's student, don't have a job yet ^^

ok thanks I'll buy this book :)

sir, can you please consider a visit or something in morrocco ? we don't have good coachs here all they care about is money and they don't even know how to sing ! I've watched yesterday your video on the head voice registre, and it really helped me, better than the brett crap, I'll try to buy your book cause you really know what you're talking about ! and pleaaase, open a school or send a subordinate or something in morrocco, we really need youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu !!!!