Snejk Posted October 21, 2009 Share Posted October 21, 2009 I made a sloppy vid recording of this until my friend makes a good instrumental after which I can record in the studio... Anyway something I've noticed is that I can take any vowel much higher now... In the last verse "It's time to make a change, it's time to get her life back for good" I do it without getting loud... Before I could only take such notes very shouty in EH and OH vowels... Weird..: Anyway, any feedback is much appreciated! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snejk Posted February 16, 2010 Author Share Posted February 16, 2010 Oh :3 Bump... xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greekmac7 Posted February 26, 2010 Share Posted February 26, 2010 You have a lot of capability in your voice clearly. I think you could easily improve the delivery of the song by giving the vocals a little more bite - for me its a little soft. I'd like to hear it a little more rocky - especially given the content. I think rock would relate better to the lyrics about bars etc, as oppose to soft folk. But again, your notes can't be faulted so for me its not a quaestion of singing, more a question of style - and that comes down to people's taste i guess :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise Posted February 26, 2010 Share Posted February 26, 2010 Your voice and singing are pleasing. I agree with greekmac7 that stylistically, this song would have more impact delivered in a rocky style - the lyrics deliver a powerful message. Having said that - folk and blues singers have been delivering equally strong messages in a laid back way for years, so I guess it boils down to individual taste. You could even try this as a rap/hiphop style. :cool: Cheers louise Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snejk Posted March 6, 2010 Author Share Posted March 6, 2010 Thanks for the comments!! The idea was like... I got the line "bitch please" in my head and thought; "what if to make a degrading rap text and sing it like a cheezy ballad?" The lyrics didn't exactly become that ghettoish but the result was as intended Now though I wish I could make it more rocky so I can play it with my band but... I can only make ballads so I have no idea how to go about doing something else with it... Glorp!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seventh Fear Posted March 7, 2010 Share Posted March 7, 2010 Personaly I would of called it "Hey listen to me" but it is rocky man it sounds like a progressive rock song it needs big hanging power chords behind it lind a like SkidRow, you voice is quite cool very melodic but i think your song needs a dirty vocal to put it across better but it's shit hot song well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Administrator Robert Lunte Posted March 7, 2010 Administrator Share Posted March 7, 2010 Interesting lyric and context... you do have a pleasant/pretty voice... nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gno Posted March 13, 2010 Share Posted March 13, 2010 Great song! Nice vocal performance and I like the lighting in the video. Are you thinking about adding any more instrumentation to the song? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snejk Posted March 13, 2010 Author Share Posted March 13, 2010 Actually yeah, I want to make an arrangement featuring more instruments... I am however crap at that so I hope I can get some help from friends who can play guiotar/bass/etc :3 Thanks for the kind comment :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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