TMV World Legacy Member Lolife Posted January 13, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted January 13, 2013 Im new here, so i wanted to share a bit of work. Hope you will give it a listen, and comment a bit on my tonal character, and voice. I now i have a mistake here and there. I am very unshure on my singing skills, so please dont hesitate on being harsh with your comments. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member ronws Posted January 13, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted January 13, 2013 A couple of note wobbles. You were on pitch, job #1. The wobbles are easily fixed by a little more control over the exhalation of breath. Keep tension out of the throat and in the abs, where it belongs. I like your voice and it reminds me a little of Jon Anderson from Yes. That's a compliment. It may be an accident of genetics but count that as a blessing and leave it the way it is. In other words, mucho applaus-o for not trying to sound like Layne. Good playing, good recording, good editing. Anything else would be a stylistic concern and I liked your style. And if that is not cut-throat enough for you, then I can't help much more. Just watch the pitch and in your case, that would be solved by breath support. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member OldPainless Posted January 13, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted January 13, 2013 I thought you did a good job on one of my favorite AIC songs I think Ron got it right with his comment. To add something, I feel you sometimes hold the notes a bit longer than you have to. But that's maybe just personal opinion. You have a very, very pleasant voice and I hope you upload more! Nice guitar playing and sound quality as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Lolife Posted January 13, 2013 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted January 13, 2013 Thank you guys for the very very kind words and crit! I will take it all up to consideration :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Foreinger Posted January 13, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted January 13, 2013 I think that on the whole you sang this song very good and expressive! I am a beginner and I don't have the right to critisize a better performance than mine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Lolife Posted January 14, 2013 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted January 14, 2013 I think that on the whole you sang this song very good and expressive! I am a beginner and I don't have the right to critisize a better performance than mine. Thank you very much, and of course you have the right to do that. I am interested in everyones oppinion to reach best possible performance and tone! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Scotty D Posted January 14, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted January 14, 2013 Tone is really good. I agree that too many people try to mimic Layne on this song (including myself) and that's a mistake. You brought a nice straightforward take to the song that worked. Just keep practicing to improve your vocal control some. Very nice job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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