TMV World Legacy Member Onacor Posted March 25, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 25, 2013 Hi All, would like some critique on my vocals in this sample I've done for Simple Man. www.soundcloud.com/Onacor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member MDEW Posted March 25, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 25, 2013 I think you have a good voice for this song. There are a few different versions of this song. I am partial to the original by LYNYRD SKYNYRD( because I am old and that is the one I listened to ). Lynyrd Skynyrd sings a different melody than you were singing. On the vocals I did not hear anything worth critiquing. It sounded good . The melody was just different from what I am used to hearing. "You need a strong foundation to reach the heights." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member ronws Posted March 26, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 26, 2013 It sounds like you were inspired by the Shinedown cover of this song. Anyway, I think you did a good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member derek_r Posted March 26, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 26, 2013 Good job! Can't offer any advice because I'm here seeking knowledge not imparting it But it certainly worked for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Onacor Posted March 27, 2013 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 27, 2013 that you guys.. I'm trying to improve my voice, and although I agree the Classic version by LS is my favorite, it is also non-challenging to sing.. this version by this guy Brent from shinedown, push the upper midrange to my liking, with full voice power... However, I have never seen this video before that Ron posted -- only the full band one (studio), that I heard.. he seems to really pull back in this video , especially for the chorus.. Any tips would be great to help out.. And thank you again.. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member ronws Posted March 28, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 28, 2013 Watch the video I linked and listen very closely to what he is doing with the vowels. Closed vowels like ee and oo, that is where he gets some soft round sound. Open vowels like ah and shaded toward aw, is where he gets bright enough to shake the wall framing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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