TMV World Legacy Member Keith Posted November 3, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted November 3, 2013 Got the first song back from the studio today. http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=12557329&q=hi&newref=1 www.drop-head.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Snejk Posted November 3, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted November 3, 2013 Hey, sounding good man. I like your calm low end; you got a cool confident/nonchalant vibe to it, I like :3 Your mid/high, while you have improves TONS, doesn't really have body/attitude. Maybe it's a stylistic choice? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Keith Posted November 3, 2013 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted November 3, 2013 Thanks man. I think that the vocals aren't loud enough myself.. What do you guys think? www.drop-head.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member ronws Posted November 3, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted November 3, 2013 That's a really good song, content-wise. And a sing-along, with a memorable melody that others can follow. It's got instant hit all over it. It sounds like you had constant singing volume throughout the song. When maybe, the higher parts should sound "louder," whether they are technically louder or not. Which would probably be mostly accomplished with some "edge" in the voice. The low and mid-parts are like a lullaby and they work well, that way. The high parts should have a little more "panic" in them. Let the audience think you are "fighting for air," even if you are not. I can tell this song comes easily to you. And, of course, this is all stylistic. Nothing technical needs fixing, as far as I can tell. So, it's a matter of your interpretation. Aside from the physical standpoint of volume coming from resonance, volume in this recording is an auditory illusion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Snejk Posted November 3, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted November 3, 2013 Technically speaking, I would say the vibrato needs some work so that you can control it better and make it sound connected to your voice because it sounds like you put ALOT of effort into every vibrato part, pronouncing oscillation discrepancies. Why do I always feel bad when giving critique? T_T It's all in the good will! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Olem Posted November 3, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted November 3, 2013 Really good song, your band´s Helmet sound with a touch of Queensryche vocals is cool. Your vocals are really good here, Keith. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Danielformica Posted November 3, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted November 3, 2013 nice job keith:) PLEASE CONTACT DANIEL@YOURVOCALTEACHER.COM WWW.YOURVOCALTEACHER@GMAIL.COMWWW.YOURVOCALTEACHER.COM WWW.DANIELFORMICAVOCALSTUDIO.COMwww.soundcloud.com/daniel-formica, https://www.youtube.com/user/danformica Disclaimer-Anything I write or try to help people with on here are techniques and things that have worked for ME. They are not necessarily" right" or "wrong" but have worked for ME and my 20+ yrs as a professional working singer. Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Keith Posted November 3, 2013 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted November 3, 2013 Thanks guys! www.drop-head.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member gno Posted November 4, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted November 4, 2013 Nice mix. I think the vocals came out good - nice performances. On the loudness of the vocals - yeah I think the vocals need a bit more processing. I think more compression, and definitely needs some high frequency boosting. And maybe a better short reverb that is properly EQ'd. At this point the vocal lacks sparkle that can lead you to think the vocals aren't loud enough. I think they are loud enough, except in the high frequencies. My Music:http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=897808 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Snejk Posted November 4, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted November 4, 2013 Doubling solves! Best technique in the book for everything, including migraine and chronic chronism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Keith Posted November 4, 2013 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted November 4, 2013 Doubling solves! Best technique in the book for everything, including migraine and chronic chronism. I recorded double tracks. Triple in the choruses. It's just too tight to be noticeable I guess. www.drop-head.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Snejk Posted November 4, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted November 4, 2013 That's awesome Sme people can't double tightly if so their lives depended on it ; I would have loved the chorus to have a fuller body and som oomph, that's why I didn't think it was doubled :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Keith Posted November 5, 2013 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted November 5, 2013 Ill have lots more originals soon! www.drop-head.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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