TMV World Legacy Member Keith Posted July 22, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted July 22, 2014 This is a SUPER fun song! Let me know what y'all think! www.drop-head.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member ronws Posted July 23, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted July 23, 2014 Nice and warm tones in your voice and I would like to hear more of those. It sounds like you wrote this song. Bravo, Herr Goehner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Keith Posted July 23, 2014 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted July 23, 2014 Thanks for listening! It was super fun to do, and I found cool toys within my new recording software while recording it. www.drop-head.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Keith Posted July 24, 2014 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted July 24, 2014 Wow, all these views and only 1 comment! www.drop-head.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member DavidLyon Posted July 24, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted July 24, 2014 Hi Keith, great effort man! I listened to the whole thing, and if you're willing, here are a few friendly critique observations: -- You shift into a falsetto mode somewhere around F#4, definitely by A4. Your falsetto tone is mostly accurate to the pitch, but the tone is not as pleasing to the ear as a full head voice would be. Continue working on your head voice register. I think that will improve the audience's reception. For example 0:55-1:02, kinda has a "Kermit the Frog" falsetto tone to it, if you know what I mean. On those higher notes, sing full voice, with more forte and volume, avoid the falsetto. Work on your bridging and connecting. -- You're consistently a little late on the beat, but in some areas it's especially noticeable. For example 2:03-2:10, and similar syncopated phrases in the song. Work on your time accuracy - it's especially important with Progressive Metal and syncopated or odd time signatures. I hope this doesn't offend you in any way, or come across as nit-picking. The name of the forum is "Review & Critique My Singing", so I'm just trying to kindly share some honest observations. All the best to ya! You have a good voice, keep going!!! David A. LyonMelodic Metal/Rock Vocalist from Seattle, WA, USA!www.facebook.com/DavidLyonOfficial/www.youtube.com/zimfar/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Keith Posted July 24, 2014 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted July 24, 2014 I welcome any and all critiques bro! Thanks for listening and thanks for your input! It is much appreciated! www.drop-head.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member DavidWebb526 Posted July 25, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted July 25, 2014 Overall this is a really slamming cover. The main thing I noticed vocally, is that I felt you were singing a register that was little low for you and as a result some of the notes weren't delivered with the necessary power to make them shine. This is really a though position since songs like this aren't easily arranged in different keys. If you were looking for real vocal coaching, I would advise picking pieces that could be made to fit YOUR vocals as apposed forcing your vocals over the piece. However, I am just a novice singer myself so I would completely understand if you disregarded my comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Keith Posted July 25, 2014 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted July 25, 2014 Actually, this register is a bit high for me. I could easilly sing bass lol. I have to work on most all these notes individuallty in order to even sing them. I think that is huge compliment to hear someone say that I may be singing in too low a register! www.drop-head.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Gneetapp Posted July 26, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted July 26, 2014 Yeah Keith, nice timbre man! I think it is interesting that for me you don't sound like a metal singer...but still you sound really nice. Keep on Rocking man! :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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