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Can someone critique my singing on this rendition of Cat Steven's song

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Chapman123
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I am all for changing a song to make it your own and I applaud your efforts. It sounded like your were trying to channel Leon Redbone in this. I love Redbone as much as I love Cat Stevens but it just did not fit for this song.

I could not understand any of the words and the grit along with the slurred words do not work together.

Your voice itself does not sound bad. I think you could sing a much better interpretation of this song.

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Did you have to look up Leon Redbone to understand my post? :D

When I listened to your song there were two other songs by Gabriel Kelley. Were you singing on either of those? Without the grit you sound similer to the guy singing.

I have been given the advice to keep to comments on tone and pitch in the review section but I also have problems with tone and style and when something does not CLICK I would rather have someone tell me about it.

Singing is as much about delivery as it is with tone and pitch.

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