TMV World Legacy Member napoleonboot Posted January 1, 2015 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted January 1, 2015 Cyber Agent Saviour As usual, constructive criticism or advice is welcome: This is close to being final, although I have a chance to re-track if necessary. George 1 George can often be found playing electric stringy things, and singing... [url=https://soundcloud.com/george-williams-8]and then this happens[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Bono Posted January 2, 2015 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted January 2, 2015 It seems there is a error with the link Please, review and critique my latest post: Donny Hathaway - A song for yousouncloud: https://soundcloud.com/matias-azar-1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member ronws Posted January 2, 2015 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted January 2, 2015 Yeah, it's hard to listen when the page says the link has been removed. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member napoleonboot Posted January 2, 2015 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted January 2, 2015 Oops! I'm not sure why the link didn't work, anyway here it is differently: Cyber Agent Saviour Also fixed in OP George can often be found playing electric stringy things, and singing... [url=https://soundcloud.com/george-williams-8]and then this happens[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member ronws Posted January 2, 2015 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted January 2, 2015 Bond, James Bond. And yes, Miss Moneypenny, shaken, not stirred. Good stuff, George. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Singingnewbie Posted January 2, 2015 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted January 2, 2015 I have minor hearing issues and i cant hear trebles perfectly and some of the mids, keep that in mind as i tell you this sounds to me bass-heavy. Also i'd say the vocals should be about 5-10% louder, at the start when instruments play low its better but later its somewhat covered. Nice instrumentals and vocal melody, i missed lots of the lyrics but thats normal for me and unnecessary for my critique. Personally i would change few things like keeping the vowels at the end of the words a bit longer when possible. Also i can imagine it as a metal song with more projected aggressive guitars and vocals. Anyway, very good job, i liked the whole atmosphere of the song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member napoleonboot Posted January 2, 2015 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted January 2, 2015 Thanks for listening and commenting. I agree on the mix being bass heavy, and vocals being a little quiet. If you are interested, here are the lyrics: (verse 1) Where are you going tonight? Gonna hide in the shadows, Away from the light An undercover agent, a spy Bound and determined to stay out of sight (pre chorus) Another case is pending Have to find some more clues Tie up the loose ends Then we'll have the truth (chorus) Just enough time to save the day Read the prophecy well Now he can be on his way To set the prisoner free, Only he has the key. (verse 2) How are you feeling so far? You're now free from the shadows, Ready for the fight An undercover agent, a spy The innocent pawn, the fool Screams in pure delight (pre-chorus) (chorus) (bridge) Open up the trap, Shut down the main frame Open up your eyes Its all been bad dream Wake up to a smile, Cyber agent saviour Shake the hand of the man Who pulled the plug from the screen (chorus) Cyber agent saviour x4 George can often be found playing electric stringy things, and singing... [url=https://soundcloud.com/george-williams-8]and then this happens[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member napoleonboot Posted January 2, 2015 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted January 2, 2015 I have just updated the links above to a newer version with better EQ (not so bass heavy). George can often be found playing electric stringy things, and singing... [url=https://soundcloud.com/george-williams-8]and then this happens[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Singingnewbie Posted January 3, 2015 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted January 3, 2015 Great! But i now i am confused more with the lyrics , kidding. Hope to hear more from you. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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