TMV World Legacy Member Wes90 Posted February 11, 2015 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 11, 2015 Tell me anything you think about this https://app.box.com/s/4sxitld41k61ww4442fft6o1bhah5suh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member tmikeg Posted February 12, 2015 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 12, 2015 Very nice enjoyed it. Liked the imitations timbre also. No need to critique, you know where u could improve it, but I enjoyed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeremy Mohler Posted February 12, 2015 Share Posted February 12, 2015 Tone is really nice for most of it, but your pitch is off a lot. If you can get your pitch down you will have a really nice instrument there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Gneetapp Posted February 12, 2015 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 12, 2015 I liked it! Nice relaxed timbre. I think you still can improve it a little bit overall. Keep them coming! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member ronws Posted February 12, 2015 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 12, 2015 The only pitchy spots I could hear was just before "give love" when your voice was cracking. Also, the graduated siren before that, if you resonate a little more acutely, that sound will beef up. But this song is definitely do-able on your voice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeremy Mohler Posted February 13, 2015 Share Posted February 13, 2015 The only pitchy spots I could hear was just before "give love" when your voice was cracking. Also, the graduated siren before that, if you resonate a little more acutely, that sound will beef up. But this song is definitely do-able on your voice. The first part of the first verse is quite off in my opinion, then it redeems itself after that and the pitch problems are more subtle from there until the part you mention. But yeah, listening back again I really enjoy your timbre throughout this. You definitely have this song in your range, you just need to work out the finer details and it will really shine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member KillerKu Posted February 13, 2015 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 13, 2015 I enjoyed this and want to cover this some day myself. I can kind of hear what Jeremy is saying on that 'down' word especially in the first verse, but it's not horrifically out of tune. I still enjoyed it. The siren imo took a bit too long to reach the top note and as a consequence was hovering on out of key notes a bit too much. If you sped up the siren it might have not fixated on some of the conflicting pitches in between. Ronws is right that if you increase the resonance on a few of the more falsettoish sections, it would add more body. Overall I think if you just keep training you'll improve where you need to improve. It sounds like a good foundation and is already pretty cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member OldPainless Posted February 15, 2015 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 15, 2015 I liked it. Great transitions from chest to head voice. I didn't really notice a lot of pitch problems. Only one or two cases. It sounded like you were a little out of breath at some of the higher parts, but that happens to almost everyone when singing Queen songs I'd say overall you did a great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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